Squirtlepowiee

Haiii! This was great! I love reading things about death and torture and related stuff. xD The description was great, but what bothered me was the rhythm. The rhyme was ...

Haiii! This was a pretty powerful poem. I love the style and all the imagery you used. This beginning of the poem started off a bit weird. "Forgetting you, and ...

Haiii! This is a wonderful story. I like how each event transitions smoothly into the next. Your writing style stayed mostly consistent throughout the entire story. There was one line ...

Haiii! Whoa! Nice cliff hanger ending! They kind of annoy me, but I still like them. Mainly because of not knowing what happened after, but that just adds to the ...

Haiii! Whoa, this was strong. The last part. There isn't much critiquing going on. I especially love the part: "Guilty or innocent? Guilty or innocent!" The use of repetition was ...

Haiii! I love this story! There are some errors I would like to point out though. In the 2nd paragraph, it says, "Perfection is key but I can’t even find ...

Haiii! I love this poem! When you read something that is just plain amazing, you would know. And I know! The last line of the first stanza could use some ...

Haiii! This is really cool! I like how it transitions from a happy scene to a sad one. I didn't really get when you wrote, "Missing him was the best ...

Hello! I'm new to this website, but I can tell that it's awesome. And you're poem is awesome as well! I think it needs just a tiny bit more work. ...