SporkPunk

Hey Bubbles! Sporks here, as requested. :D I go through the story, making comments as I read. Technical errors are in red, word choice suggestions are in green, and my ...

Hey there! Sporks here as promised for a review! I'm going to try to be as thorough as I can, which means I'll go through the piece, correcting things and ...

Hey Renn! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this today. I'm going to go through your chapter, offering feedback and corrections as I read. Technical problems will be in red, ...

Jashy! Sporky is here for an unsolicited review, mostly because I really love The Lockets. :) I'm going to go through it word-by-word because, well, because I can. :P Technical ...

Iceprincess! Sporks here for a fantastic, swashbuckling, ace review. Or something like that. I have to say before I get into obscure things, that I truly like this poem. And ...

Hey Sachi! First off, this poem is on a subject many people can relate to, which is good because there's mass appeal. The only problem is that since everyone feels ...

Hey there! I'm SporkPunk and I'll review this today. I wont review from the fanfic point, simply because I'm not familiar with this particular anime, though I do like anime. ...

Hey there!(: I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this today. I'm going to go through your piece fairly thoroughly. Red is technical mistakes, green is for word choice, and purple ...

Hey Dino! It's Spork, and I'll review this today.(: Red is spelling, green is word choice, and purple is my commentary. “You know I enjoy games and all , Síla ...

Hey Sakura! Sorry this took me so long. :C But I'm here now! Red is grammar, green is word choice, and purple is my commentary. :smt003 Adalyn lay on the ...

Hey there! I'm SporkPunk and I'll review this today. :) So, the beginning, for me, was a rough start. But the interjection of German kept me reading. The middle is ...

Hey there Kate! I'm SporkPunk and I'll review this. :D What I like: -Cute Idea. It's really, really a sweet idea for a cute little poem. -The couplets. A lot ...

Hey! I'm Sporks and I'm going to I really rather like this. It has a nice rhythm and flow to it. The rhyme scheme is very well done. The imagery ...

Hey there! So, this is nice and all. I like the word choice, it's pretty, but there's no substance. You need to find something concrete about which to make this ...

Hey there Victoria! I'm Sporks and I'll join in with these reviewers. I must say that I disagree with most of the "corrections" that were made by Truth. Not every ...