SporkPunk

Hey Jennya! I like this. A lot. :D I dunno, it's just really amusing and kinda funny. I don't think there's anything technically wrong with it. I don't mind that ...

Hey Kat. :] I'm trying really, really hard to find something to nitpick, so I can feel helpful as a reviewer. But there really isn't anything technical I can pick ...

Hey tinkem! Sporks here for a review. Hm. I can't say I'm a huge fan of this kind of poetry. The angsty thing has been done a lot before. That's ...

Hi Rosey! What can I say? I really, absolutely adore these poems. The rhythm and flow are very nice. I read them twice because it was so good. :p The ...

Hi Mask! :] Review time? So, I like this. The imagery is quite nice, but some of your references make little sense. (Like the bright light, and the everyone being ...

Hey there! Sporks here for a review. (Though I assume that's kind of obvious, otherwise--never mind.) It's long and thin, vibrating under your feet alive. You take a careful step ...

Hey Weaver! Back to review this chapter. (I really need to read 1-7. I have no idea what's going on. But you need a review, methinks.) Again, as with the ...

Hey there Weaver! :D Sporks here for a review. For the most part, your grammar is intact. I didn't see anything crazy enough to comment on, so good on that. ...

Hey there! So, grammar looks okay. Watch out for spelling though. "Tirade," is an example. Other than that, looks good. :D Couple questions: 1. Why is the sheriff in a ...

Hey there Nike! Sporky here for a review. :] I know I haven't read the other parts but I think you deserve a review. So, for grammar things, I didn't ...

Hi there! Sporks here for a review. I guess I could go into the technical aspects of poetry, but I'll let another reviewer get those since my talents are not ...

Hi there! I'll add on to what Jabbsy said. :P I'm Sporky by the way, haha. I think your grammar is mostly in good shape, and I found nothing of ...

Hey ChocoCat! (Can I call you that from now on?) Sporks here for a review. I don't know your exact prompt, so I can't give it a full analytical review. ...

Hey there Milk! :] Sporks here for a review. I'm not going to be able to give this a serious review, but I'll give you some general comments. It's really ...

Hey futbol! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll review this today. Okay, so, I really think this could use some work. Mostly for the grammar errors, and a bit for the characterization. ...