Spitfire

Well hey there! Here to review! Katric appeared out of the crowd, arms wrapped around a powdered face young woman. His hands hung a little too low to be considered ...

This was really good! I enjoyed the battle scene, I just love those kinds of stories! Overall anything else I might've wanted to say has already been said, so I'll ...

Hey there! Finally getting to read chapter 1, so here I go... He knew his mother was He woke to a blazing inferno only to see a creature making the ...

Well hey there! I was surprised to get your PM, but since you wanted a review, here I am. The basic errors Lydia already went over, so I'm not gonna. ...

Okay, well here I am to review the edited version... As far as he can remember, his father had been same to him ever since —cold, distant, unapproachable. I would ...

Hey dude! Here I am to review! I saw this, just a little something: What had just happened? What had everything in the room suddenly floated up to Noah’s height? ...

Well hey there GQ! I thought others would have reviewed by now, but apparently I'm the first, yay! :smt003 I thought the chapter was good, everything seemed to flow well, ...

Okay, well since your prologue and first chapter start with two different characters, you don't have to worry about the two not fitting together. The chapter was really good, I ...

Wow, this is really good! I loved the flow of your writing, and everything seemed to really chain-in together perfectly. I also liked the story base, how ever short it ...

Well hey there! I'm Spitfire, here to review! It was hard to explain; it just smelt weird… Shouldn't it be smelled? I peered round the corner and saw a man ...

Oooh, I like this one :D Definitely the best chapter! There aren't really any mistakes, so I'm not going to go through the chapter... Just one thing I thought was ...

Okay, I've read most of the story, and it was good, excluding all the errors. However, one thing is really bugging me, your story is too "happily ever after". There's ...

First reply! Mouhahaha! Honestly dude, I'm debating... Do I really love it or really really love it...um... I'll go for the latter. :D Lol, really enjoyed it, thought the writing ...

Hey there RH! Here to review your story! I'm not going to go into the grammar department, I think pretty much everything was said on that... I thought the story ...

Again, I like it. It seems better, although I can't specifically remember much of what was changed, except for the names and the cops, really. For information, the story is ...