SpiritedWolfe

Thanks for the review! I'll look into your last suggestion, since I wasn't quite happy with that part.

In all seriousness, I'm over him. I've just thought about how I felt in that time. It's alright

Katya. It's just a poem, goodness. I had inspiration and I wrote it. :/

It's a part of the poem, genius. The progression as the tone changes?

Thanks for the review ^^ Some of the reason there isn't that much 'extra thoughts' or interaction is because there is none. The narrator merely spent their time wishing and ...

Those specific lines you pointed out aren't meant in the literal sense. While the two have met before, the other refuses to acknowledge the narrator's existence. Thanks for the review.

Look at how wonderful how of a reviewer I was back then~ Don't you miss these quality reviews? xD

Whoops. Sorry, this posted twice.

Haha, take from it what you want xD No one ever said you had to listen to me (sorry, I tried my best :P ).

My bad. Posted twice.

Why chose one from 5 years ago... o.o

No Sam perspective. That would be weird. Since it's 34 chapters in, switching to Sam would seem super strange...

Oh, the rich heiress I definitely didn't catch xD Sorry about that, but I assumed the saying 'poor man' was more generalized as an idiom of sorts. And what I ...

He must be like a bounty hunter, then. (I don't remember much honestly. But he does always just kind of seem there.)

25. TWENTY FIVE. THAT'S NOT TWENTY THREE *huffs*