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Hello Ruro, Wolf here for a review. This was quite interesting, and I'm quite interested in why this was marked fantasy rather than sci-fi. The sort of Star Trek feel ...

Hey Pomp, Wolf here for a review. Ohhh, first person you say? I remember you saying in chat that you didn't like it, and I guess this is why. Alright, ...

Hello again Utopia, Wolf here for a second review of your wonderful masterpiece! (I just now noticed the name of the powers is the same as your username, interesting!) Wow, ...

Hello Kenz, Wolf here to review to embrace the power of Mina! First off nitpicks: Also why should we do it, we are almost Metals. I'm sure I mentioned this ...

Hello Utopia, Wolf here for a review. First off, I have a few nitpicks, most of them really small: ...whip up a light breeze.Next to me I saw... Tiny error, ...

Hello Utopia, Wolf here for a review. I really found this interesting and I liked the concept quite a bit. Even though in the beginning it started off a little ...

Hello gill, Wolf here for a review. (Please excuse any grammatical/spelling errors for I am on a phone). Alright, I really did love this. Even though it was quite short ...

Hello Raven, Wolf here for a review. Oh my goodness, that ending! That is so sad! I mean, I would expect the grandmother to at least check on her, because ...

Hello Noelle, Wolf is here for another review. Akia! Why must she be so hard headed! It would have been easy to just tell the vision to Falyn then and ...

Hello Katya and Raven, Wolf here for a review. Is it sad that I laughed at this? To be honest, I found this more humorous than sad, since well, this ...

Hello Noelle, Wolf here for a review as promised. I'm sure I've already told you how much I hate you already, but well, it's true. Your use of dramatic irony ...

Hello again, Nika, Wolf here for another review. This is coming along really nicely. I like how a little more information was given to us here (like, in the last ...

Hello again Mersize, Wolf here for another review. So I'll just start out with some nitpicks: The next day (Thursday) was expected to be the same thing all over again ...

Hello Nika, Wolf here for a review. Wow, I really loved this, and all the metaphors that you added in make it really interesting and hilarious at the same time. ...

Hello Hysterical, Wolf here for a review. Just a little tip: the entire passage doesn't have to be in italics. Prologue or not, italics are usually only used to show ...