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SpiritedWolfe

and i kept walking, even if my feet were too tired to hold me up anymore

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Removed

    Hello again Kay, Wolf here for yet another review of your wonderful novel. So, being the really smart person I am, have not yet read the previous chapters. I know, ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Ill Fated Love- Chapter 3

    Hello again, Blocked, Wolf here for a review. Wow, that ending again, my goodness! To be honest, I hate the both of them. I hate Pierce for being so stupid ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Health, General Re: it was a choice, and you will live with it tw: drugs

    Alright, Hello Silent, Wolf here for a review. So I see a lot of grammar errors here. One huge one, is that there are absolutely no capital letters. So, there ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The House

    Hello Jack, Wolf here for a review. Great job, I actually found this really suspenseful and I even found myself looking around my room hoping that there wasn't some monster ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: My son

    Hello wickedlygood, Wolf here for a review. So, I really, really loved this concept, because I absolutely love fantasy and dragons especially. I thought this was really cute and it's ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Legacy of Bob- The Fair Maiden

    Hello mawpah, Wolf here for a review. This was absolute genius. Seriously, I died at so many spots, such as Disposable Character One and the fork in the road. The ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: With Revisions: The Deal Will Live

    Hello Uni, Wolf here for a review. So, this is a really nice start, but I don't feel like this is a complete story, but instead more of a skeleton ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: The Writer-Part 1: The Poet

    Hello Corax, Wolf here for a review. I think in total I noticed two or three little tiny grammatical errors, but they are quite small and can easily be found ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: More Than A Dream

    Hello Roxie, Wolf here for a review. I should probably read what the genres of a piece are before I actually read it. Seriously, when the romance came on, I ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Action / Adventure Re: How Math Helped Me Fish

    Hello Larsen, Wolf here for a review. This was a really cool topic. Usually fishing isnt the most common thing to write about in the world (like high fantasy or ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Narrative Re: Journals of a Macrocologist

    Hello Abel, Wolf here for a review. While browsing through the short stories, I stumbled upon this work, and decided to have a go at reviewing it. So this topic ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Black Eyes Chapter 9: Quiet Waters

    Hello Adji, Wolf here for a review. So, I've got a few technical errors to point out. First off, every time new dialogue is introduced (whether its a new person ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Black Fate Chapter 2 Skyrim fanfic

    Hello kyddi, Wold here for a review. Really the first thing I noticed when I read through, is how choppy and lack of emotion this is. Each sentence is usually ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Carnation: The Assassin's Tears - Chapter 6 (Part 2)

    Hello Brunnera, Wolf here for a review of your fabulous work. I'm sorry to say, but I'm not going to give very much criticism for this work. I didn't notice ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: War is heaven (and heaven) Chapter 1-3

    Hello Ozzie, Wolf here for a review. So I see I've stumbled upon yet another three chapter piece, and I will format the same way I handled the last one. ...

    Jun 29, 2014


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