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Journals of a Macrocologist

by abelgaiya


From one of the few copies of the journals of Nazbanar Iyaga, as translated by Bernard Paul.

Transphysicality - each realm is physical to its inhabitant; each realm is spiritual to its exhabitants. This is the fundamental principle of macrocology. It means that every realm is guided by a limiting set of natural laws and microsystems within the macrosystem, to which its inhabitants operate by.

There are technical differences between realms and dimensions; the most apparent being that the latter exist within the former. The realm in which I write this journal is called the homonic realm. This is the realm where the reader of this entry primarily resides ... I use the word 'primarily' because you exist within multiple realms simultaneously - a concept known as multidimensionality. However, such subjects shall arise later in my journal.

I must confess that literature is not my forte. With many things needed to be written, I often deviate from explaining a concept whenever a peripheral subject of relatively equal interest emerges from my explanations. Thus, I apologise, in advance, for any convolutions that I might cause as a result of such peripheral deviations.

My name is Nazbanar Iyaga, and I am what the shadow academia calls a macrocologist. You see, in the 1700s, this new approach to scientific inquiry was born ... the manger of which can be traced to the home of Sir Christopher Humphrey. The master of the house was, however, not the progenitor of macrocology; it was his slave, Olu. Although slight variations of the story exist, the most common story was that Sir Humphrey was a christian physicist who was particularly interested in phenomenological applications of physics. As fate would have it, his slave was quite an inquisitive fellow who showed interest in Sir Humphrey's line of scientific inquiry. The slave showed exceptional ability in learning the concepts of physics, but the slave's knowledge of West African voodoo practices and laws clashed with those of the natural sciences.

After Olu got converted to christianity, he and Sir Humphrey secretly worked on a completely new approach to science by integrating the observed possibilities of voodoo, the established possibilities of physics and biology, and the documentations of other religions - primarily christianity - to construct, theorize, and test the macrosystemics of the macrocosm.

At the time of writing this journal, I was aged 76. In it, you shall know how the macrocosm operates intercologically (systemics of realm interaction). Fortunately, the field of quantum physics has slowly begun to tear off the blindfold that has for so long prevented the mainstream scientist from exploring intercological possibilities. Sadly for me, it is unlikely that I shall be alive to witness as science begins to meet what the mainstream terms the 'supernatural'.


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Sun Jun 29, 2014 8:33 pm
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Hello Abel, Wolf here for a review.

While browsing through the short stories, I stumbled upon this work, and decided to have a go at reviewing it. So this topic is quite, well... Interesting. Really, after reading this the first time I was left thinking, "Da heck did I just read?" So as I go through a second time, I'll ramble about what's going through my mind.

So, what exactly is macrocology? We're told what the fundamental of it is, but exactly what's its purpose? I'm assuming it has something to do with the different dimensions, but honestly I have no idea. Though, I'm guessing this isn't supposed to be realistic, and I'm probably over thinking some things.

I really don't see this as much of a narrative. Instead I see it more of a research paper describing the discovery and purposes of these different dimensions. Sure you have the story of the physician and his slave, but still, there's no dialogue, no thoughts of the people, or even emotions. I guess I'm trying to say make it more narrative-y.

If the purpose of this was to mess with mind, great job! It was amusing to read and I quite enjoyed it. Happy Review Day and Keep Writing,
~Wolfare

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Fri Jun 13, 2014 10:22 am
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This is totally great and beautifully written. The words used are really good and they enhance the beauty of this piece of writing. I must say that this is really informative and I being a very young writer, can learn a lot from it. The flow of writing is appreciable and the way the subject is handled also deserves praise. :)





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