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Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 1]
Hi mordax! Apologies for the delay, but I'm here to review your lovely first chapter ^^ I wanted to start off by saying I really enjoyed this chapter. I thought ...
Feb 21, 2021 -
Re: Before the Dragon - 3.2
Hi Shady! Back at it again until I vanish for another week... I liked this section of the chapter! It followed what I was saying about just needing a bit ...
Feb 19, 2021 -
Re: Before the Dragon - 3.1
Hi Shady! It's only been like 10 days, but I'm finally back again
Feb 19, 2021 -
Re: Cortez Shivick( Chapter 1)
Hi 1234! Here as requested. I'll spend this review focusing on some larger concepts that you can use to improve your writing overall, instead of talking about the plot of ...
Feb 17, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 6, Part 2
Hi Mea! The description for this chapter made me laugh and it is also so accurate, but definitely not in the way that I expected. Like, sure Fyn kidnapped a ...
Feb 17, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 6, Part 1
Hi Mea! :3 I’m quick today. I loved this part of the chapter. It was very well written, it had a bit of escalation that I had been wanting from ...
Feb 16, 2021 -
Re: Aether's Heart 6
Hi Vincian! ^^ I'm on top of it today, and I was interested in reading more! I didn't actually notice that not everyone was located in Syna in the last ...
Feb 15, 2021 -
Re: Chapter One: Gatherer Spirits (Trinity's POV)
Hi Myre! A belated welcome to YWS :) I'm glad to see you're already posting and reviewing! I wanted to start off my review by saying that I enjoyed reading ...
Feb 14, 2021 -
Re: Aether's Heart 5
Hi Vincian and ScarlettFire! This was another solid introduction! Elidyr seems like the typical well-meaning, just wants to help type of individual, which is great to have in a story ...
Feb 13, 2021 -
Re: Aether's Heart 4
Hi Vincian and sound! :) I really enjoyed reading this section and meeting Belxibis ^^ You've have a good handle on his voice, I feel like, and while I agree ...
Feb 12, 2021 -
Re: The Bubble
Hi Kalsie! ^^ First of all, this is a really difficult feeling that can be challenging to navigate, and I’m glad to hear that you’re trying to express yourself in ...
Feb 11, 2021 -
Re: Aether's Heart 3
Hello again! I think this has been one of my favorite sections so far! I also really like Paimon. Throughout this section, she was really well characterized, and I'm very ...
Feb 10, 2021 -
Re: Before The Dragon (Revamp) - Chapter 2.2 (Revised)
Hi Shady! :) You mentioned this was a more revised version than what other reviewers had read, so I still haven't read previous reviews. (Definitely not because I'm lazy.) The ...
Feb 9, 2021 -
Re: Aether's Heart 2
Hello! I'm back for the next part :) I'd like to echo what a lot of people said about the descriptions, because I thought they were especially well done. I ...
Feb 8, 2021 -
Re: Before The Dragon (Revamp) - Chapter 2.1 (Revised)
Hi, Shady! Back again ^^ Same deal as before, where I didn't read other reviews, but I'll give what thoughts I can! One of the things that I agree with ...
Feb 7, 2021