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SpiritedWolfe

and i kept walking, even if my feet were too tired to hold me up anymore

  • Short Story » Realistic, Humor Re: A Second Chance!

    Hello there, donizback. I saw you entered this in the poetry inspired contest and decided to drop a review! And the first thing that I'll say is that the other ...

    Mar 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 35 Part 2

    Hey, Noelle! Back again already ^^ Alright, so I'm reading Mina's first dialogue, and I'm trying to understand Mina's train of though, but once again here, it kind of seems ...

    Mar 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 35 Part 1

    Hey, Noelle! Finally here ~ Alright, so yes, it has been such a long time since we saw Falyn, around seven weeks because of those two monster chapters with Akia. ...

    Mar 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fanfiction Re: Silence is Silver, Alt Ending 1.

    Hey, Adrian! Ah, already making fan-fictions of your own novel? ;) I guess they're not really fan-fictions because you are the author, but that's besides the point. Since I believe ...

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 50. (Goodbye.)

    Hey, Adrian! So, I can into this thinking I'd leave a nice, long, thorough review, since it is the last part. The big finale deserves some great feedback, no? But ...

    Mar 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Silence is Sometimes Turquoise

    Hey, Adrian! Oh my goodness. Having read SiS (obviously), I can understand all of this so perfectly well, knowing about Sadie and her horrible nanny-ness. The story itself makes sense ...

    Mar 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Humor Re: Being Slim - MMFD Fanfic

    Hello there! Welcome to YWS~ To start it off, the diary entry is really odd. I'm not really sure how it equates to a diary, because it seems like she's ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Trials of a Master Thief: Chapter 1

    Hey there! So, I see you've got quite a few great review on this, so why not add one more? :P I will let you know now that I have ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 4

    Hey there, LittleFox! To start things off, I'm not all to sure about this Altan guy. He seems to devious and cold hearted for nothing. We don't really see a ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 3

    Hey again! So you've got a longer chapter here, which is really nice. The more the better, I say. My only really drastic issue here is there seems to be ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 2

    Hia there! Back for more already. So, before I read on any further, my very first thought when reading the first paragraph was where did she get her blade from? ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 1

    Hey, LittleFox! I recall reading one of your works in the past, and I must say, your writing is just as beautiful as I remember it! ^^ Save more praise ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Then it all came crashing down...

    Hey, tennishead! Welcome to YWS ~ Alright, I'll start off by adding a little more onto one of the points of the reviewer below me. The phone call and how ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: gun powder

    Hello there. Another welcome to the YWS World! Alright, so the reviewer below me mentioned a ton of really great points and you should take her advice into a ton ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The story of #53 Chapter 2: New Friends

    Hello, again! Ah, I see we have the brick here. I assume some kind of formatting with YWS must have messed up l one way or another, because your previous ...

    Mar 7, 2015


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