SpiritedWolfe

Noelle. You're making this so difficult for me, again. As you saw the lovely spam, I'm not happy with you either, but let's get into this. She saw Sam get ...

“You worked with the little worm.” That's Akia's idea of an insult? Rhys is a little worm now! (I was expecting full out expletives, but alright. Not today xD) Hey ...

Hey again! Something that I forgot to note last chapter was the very ending line. Akia doesn't have powers anymore, remember? So she can't transport people anywhere. That being said, ...

Hia again! Half way there! Something I noticed just now was how many more adverbs are being used. Especially in the first couple paragraphs. I noted the use of 'softly', ...

Hia again! Look at my streak! (Also, not reading other reviews again Dx) I regret to inform you that this chapter was waaaaay too good for me to find broad ...

Hello there! I think this was the last one I got to pre-read, so my extensive knowledge ends here. Quick thing: Deanie mentioned the first sentence was essentially starting the ...

Me again! I may skim Deanie's review, but not read it all the way, as time allows. Reading through this, I realized that we don't really know what's happened between ...

Hey again! I feel like now is a way too late reaction to Falyn realizing that it's the day of the big fight. *le gasp* and she's unprepared! To be ...

Hey, there! Ready for some review spam? (While doing this, I won't read many of the other reviews, so pardon some repeats ^^) Alright, the first thing that I thought ...

Hello there! I just want to say that Pomp's review has so many amazing and valid points. I back them 100%. First off, reading through this noticed that there was ...

Hia there! Finally caught up with one novel ^^ This also happens to be my hardest on to critique, because so many things are just so well played throughout this. ...

Hey, Noelle! You have to go and start making this hard on me, do you? A lot of the things that I'm noticing are things that I've covered in past ...

Back yet again! The first thing that comes to mind for me is that the transition between part and the end of the last isn't the greatest. It wouldn't be ...

Hia, again! You miss me? One thing that really pops out to me, as I just finished reading the first part, is that the phrase "No way" a lot . ...

Hey there! I'm finally here, because I've decided to get myself into gear (for whatever reason...) I slink into the shadows , not letting my back leave the wall. Without ...