SpiritedWolfe

Hello, EagleFly! I think you have a good start to a chapter here. First, I'll start off with some of the things I liked. Throughout this, you have some good ...

Hello! A warm welcome to YWS for you ^^ I'll start off with some grammatical and specific suggestions/comments. My classmates were silent as I went straight to my seat, confused ...

Hello, Jevan! A warm welcome to YWS from myself ^^ So this is an interesting read and introduction to a story, but before I go on further with the review, ...

Hiya, Hatt! Finally got around to this :3 I'm a tad rusty when it comes to reviewing so bear with me. I'm going to start off by saying I actually ...

Hey there, Jasper! I'm here for a review of this lovely novel chapter :3 Sorry, I haven't read the prologue, but that shouldn't inhibit my understanding of the story, since ...

Hey, Noelle! I'm here super early. Are you proud of me? xD So I'll keep this short because I really don't have a lot to say this part. I quite ...

Hello there! Skimming through this at first, I'm really excited to see there is very little dialogue throughout it. As you probably saw last review, I was getting rather sick ...

Hey there! Back again ^^ A little later than expected, but it'll do. Also, I haven't read previous reviews, so pay extra attention to things mentioned twice! Okay, my very ...

Hello there! I'll just jump in by saying, I'm not sure what to make of this. Because this is writing, I will make the assumption that this is fictions (and ...

Hey there, R4! Sorry it took so long, but I intend to catch up today (or tomorrow.) ^^ I think I'll take a break this time about technical stuff and ...

Hello there! Sorry for the long delay -- I've finally come around to this :3 First things first, where is her mother? In the very first chapter, Anna's mother was ...

Hello there! Welcome to the site ^^ I hope you enjoy yourself here ~ So, let's jump right into the review! The first thing that I notice, without even having ...

Hello there! So, first off, I'm a little confused about what you're intending for this piece. Do you want it to be able to stand alone? Or do you want ...

Hello there! Welcome to the site ^^ I'll just jump into the review by pulling out a quote: Excitement over, we hefted our packs onto our backs and taking one ...

Hello there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely piece of yours ^^ This was quite an enjoyable read, since it's short and sweet and it quickly introduces ...