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Re: Sky City Epsilon - Chapter 1: Darnell
Hello, Fantasy! For the most part, I have a vague idea of what is happening in this story. There is some rift going on between the world and what's known ...
Sep 7, 2018 -
Re: Deleted
Hello, EagleFly! I think you have a good start to a chapter here. First, I'll start off with some of the things I liked. Throughout this, you have some good ...
Sep 6, 2018 -
Re: 1- b u t t e r c u p
Hello! A warm welcome to YWS for you ^^ I'll start off with some grammatical and specific suggestions/comments. My classmates were silent as I went straight to my seat, confused ...
May 25, 2018 -
Re: Dragon's Fang (Prologue)
Hello, Jevan! A warm welcome to YWS from myself ^^ So this is an interesting read and introduction to a story, but before I go on further with the review, ...
May 23, 2018 -
Re: The Starlit Kestrel - Chapter One
Hiya, Hatt! Finally got around to this :3 I'm a tad rusty when it comes to reviewing so bear with me. I'm going to start off by saying I actually ...
Mar 18, 2017 -
Re: Another Zombie Novel Chapter 1 part 1
Hey there, Jasper! I'm here for a review of this lovely novel chapter :3 Sorry, I haven't read the prologue, but that shouldn't inhibit my understanding of the story, since ...
Jul 2, 2016 -
Re: Burned 7.2
Hey, Noelle! I'm here super early. Are you proud of me? xD So I'll keep this short because I really don't have a lot to say this part. I quite ...
Jun 2, 2016 -
Re: Typo Alley~O Part One
Hello there! Skimming through this at first, I'm really excited to see there is very little dialogue throughout it. As you probably saw last review, I was getting rather sick ...
Jun 1, 2016 -
Re: Typo Alley~N Part Two
Hey there! Back again ^^ A little later than expected, but it'll do. Also, I haven't read previous reviews, so pay extra attention to things mentioned twice! Okay, my very ...
May 31, 2016 -
Re: Change
Hello there! I'll just jump in by saying, I'm not sure what to make of this. Because this is writing, I will make the assumption that this is fictions (and ...
May 30, 2016 -
Re: Typo Alley~N Part One
Hey there, R4! Sorry it took so long, but I intend to catch up today (or tomorrow.) ^^ I think I'll take a break this time about technical stuff and ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Living Nightmare Chapter three
Hello there! Sorry for the long delay -- I've finally come around to this :3 First things first, where is her mother? In the very first chapter, Anna's mother was ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: The Tornado
Hello there! Welcome to the site ^^ I hope you enjoy yourself here ~ So, let's jump right into the review! The first thing that I notice, without even having ...
May 27, 2016 -
Re: See Ya
Hello there! So, first off, I'm a little confused about what you're intending for this piece. Do you want it to be able to stand alone? Or do you want ...
May 25, 2016 -
Re: For Want of Water
Hello there! Welcome to the site ^^ I'll just jump into the review by pulling out a quote: Excitement over, we hefted our packs onto our backs and taking one ...
May 25, 2016