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Re: The Devil's Calling ~Synopsis~
Hi there, SleepingSiren! Welcome to the site :) Also, I'd love to see some of your actual writing in the future! I wanted to pop by and give you some ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: the after - 1/2
Hi, Ichoi! I hope you've had a warm welcome to the YWS community :) So, I want to start off by saying that I really liked this piece. The way ...
Dec 4, 2020 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 3, Part 2
Hi, Mea! I don't really have a lot to say about this section. It felt like a solid continuation from the last part, but not a whole lot happened. They're ...
Dec 4, 2020 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 3, Part 1
Hi, Mea! I think that Cassia and Fyn are going to have a fabulous time together. And that's not just because this is a novel and character growth is a ...
Dec 2, 2020 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 2, Part 2
Hi Mea! To start off, I loved seeing the relationship between Cassia and Tilana here. This felt like a solid section of the chapter because it did a lot of ...
Dec 1, 2020 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 2, Part 1
Hi, Mea! To start off this review, I wanted to point out that I really liked the distinct change in style. One of the things I noticed about the first ...
Nov 29, 2020 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 1, Part 2
Hi, Mea! Back to it again :) First of all, you did a great job in this section establishing the culture of the drakes and expanding the worldbuilding in a ...
Nov 28, 2020 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 1, Part 1
Hi, Mea! I saw some of the later parts in the greenroom, and I was really interested in reading from your title and synopsis! I'm a lot rusty to reading ...
Nov 27, 2020 -
Re: Undertale: A Story chapter 1
Hey there, Fanta! A slightly late welcome to YWS, but I hope you're enjoying your time here ^^ I'm here to give some critique on your work. First off, I ...
Oct 6, 2018 -
Re: Hunted 1.2
Hi again, Noelle! ^^ This'll be my last chapter for the day, but I'll try to catch up with Hunted by the end of the week ~ I'm not sure ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Hunted 1.1
Back again~ Let's get right into it ^^ Overall, I also really liked this section. It started off with a good introduction to Alekos and Ren, who appear to be ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Hunted -- Prologue
Hey, Noelle!! ^^ Finally getting around to starting this. Keep in mind I'm not reading other reviews (because there are many) but still want to share my thoughts! I just ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: The demon maiden chapter ten
Hi! Back at it again for another Review Day review~ In my last review I mentioned grammar stuff, but this chapter was riddled with so many typos and grammar mistakes ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 4 *rewrite*
Hey again! Here to review your next section out of the Green Room ~ Let's get right into it. Emily yanked on a pair of black gardeners gloves and shoved ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 3 *rewrite*
Hi there! Here to save your lovely chapter from the Green Room ~ So, my first advice to you is that it would likely be better to split up your ...
Sep 30, 2018