Sparkle

Hi! Sparkle here to review! First off, excellent job! I loooooved this poem. I think it conveys an important message about society without being too wordy or metaphorical. The way ...

Hi! Sparkle here to review! This is a good poem. You have a good start here, but I think it could use some refinement. It was very deep and metaphorical ...

Hey Nina! Sparkle here to review! First off, I'm just going to nitpick some formatting. Why is half of it in italics? Also, you missed some punctuation here and there. ...

Hi! Sparkle here to review! This is a very emotionally dense poem. I agree with the previous reviewer that the formatting is interesting and visually appealing. In this poem you ...

Hi! Sparkle here to review! This is good, it has a very relatable message and familiar tone. Something that confused me was the rhyme scheme. Was there one? Was there ...

Hi! Sparkle here to review! Wow, I love the way you presented this poem. The stanzas are the perfect length, and the use of the repeating 'Caution: wet floor' is ...

Hi tgirly! Sparkle here to review! This is a very sweet and lovely poem. I adore your descriptions and imagery. Have you considered breaking this in to three-line stanzas? It's ...

Hi! Sparkle here to review! Wow, this is a pretty dark topic. You explored and described it very well in this poem, though. I loved the tone you wrote it ...

Hi! Sparkle here to review! The theme of this poem is fascinating. The poem itself is wonderfully written. I agree with what 221B said about the repetitions. They got a ...

Hi racket, Sparkle here to review! This poem is spectacular in that it explores a topic (the power of writing) that is written about often, but in such a new ...

Hi! Sparkle here to review! This is a very interesting poem visually. I liked the way you formatted it. It adds a layer of depth to the poem. It made ...

Hi, Sparkle here to review! First of all, you have a very distinct and interesting tone and voice that really pulls the reader in. You use vocabulary well and your ...

Hi, Sparkle here to review! I'm just going to get this part out of the way before I get into the meat of this piece. The title, A Single Black ...

Hi darkangel! Sparkle here to review. Firstly, I love love love your first stanza! It is beautiful and playful while still bringing your message across. This poem has a very ...

Hi smile123! Sparkle here to review. This is a good piece. It's very relatable and you executed your idea very well. I could feel your emotion and I understood it. ...