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Re: dragon art
Hello there! Ell here with a review! Okay, let's get into it! Right off the bat, this seems like a rather bittersweet story about the struggle of choosing between what ...
Sep 4, 2021 -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 23.2]
Hello! Ell here with a review! Rieka reached across the table, grabbing a koleti, a fried pork patty. I am in love with all the little details you put into ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: It’s just a day
Hello! Ell here with a review! ~First impressions: This is so sweet! This poem feels silly and lighthearted, and very genuine. It reminds me of falling in love for the ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: S.H.A.D.O.W Chapter 1. Many Meetings (part 2/3)
Heyoo, Ell here with a review! Let's get started! Alright, starting us off with: “You can’t keep ‘forgetting’ to eat! Your gonna kill yourself” I like how in this chapter, ...
Jun 19, 2021 -
Re: TMWD: Chapter 1.1
Hello! Ell here with a review! OOh, I like how you set it up as a period piece! And Bernadette's love for music is wonderfully written. Okay, on to the ...
Jun 18, 2021 -
Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 9.6
Hi, Harry! Ell here with a review! I've been reading through the Sorcerers of Hisderat for the past couple of weeks to get the full feel of it. It really ...
Jun 15, 2021 -
Re: Bound by Blood
Hello, SoullessGinger here with a review! Some first impressions: BOY am I intrigued. So far, wonderful job establishing the tone quality of Evie. She has a very distinct voice and ...
May 29, 2021 -
Re: A Story of Child Labour
Hey there- SoullessGinger here with a review! First impressions: This is so well-written and so whimsical! Now let's get into it! Edgar found his, a simple wooden door painted periwinkle, ...
May 19, 2021 -
Re: Josie, Stargazing in the Trees - Cr. 01.1
Hello! SoullessGinger here with a review! My very first impression: you are so amazing at writing imagery, and creating your scenes in the reader's mind. This section is the perfect ...
May 19, 2021 -
Re: Vampire
Hello! SoullessGinger here with a review! Can I just say, wow. This is a horribly beautiful poem. (I hope you know that's a good thing). It's vampiric in its tone ...
May 19, 2021 -
Re: Glimpses
Hello! SoullessGinger here for a review! :) First of all, I absolutely love lyrical prose, and these are beautiful examples of that. This triplet is so profound and wonderfully fantastical. ...
May 14, 2021 -
Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 2: "The...Child?"
Yesssss! I came searching for the second installment of this, and I have NOT been disappointed! WOW. just WOW. I love it so much. Time skips are always fun. I ...
Feb 21, 2021 -
Re: Hereissa: Chapter 1: Hunter
Wow, I love this! I really appreciate how you're already building us an idea of the relationships between the characters, and the political atmosphere of our setting. Also, some of ...
Feb 7, 2021 -
Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 1: "The Child"
Oh, I love this! It's such a playful start to an interesting story. And you so perfectly captured babies, which I personally think is one hell of a feat. Something ...
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: Collection of old poetry I wrote
Okay, I don't know why, but the first poem made me laugh. I didn't know a few of the words, and so I looked them up, right? And " to ...
Feb 5, 2021
