Soulkana

Awesome job I can feel the emotion behind the words and I hope to read more of yours soon Good luck and Happy Writing!!!! Soulkana

I'll give you the docuement tomorrow morning when I have time so we can do it when I get home...hopefully I get far, we gonna give a time skip XD

Okie sisie I look forward to seeing it ^^ I hope you guys don't mind me when I say I'm working on fixing it, since I saw many mistakes XD ...

Giggles* yay totally epic sis and glad I could help you with it! Good luck and Happy Writing!!!! Soulkana

I fixed it so hopefully the corrections are ok...and you were much help since I did rather poorly on this one it seems.

I really loved it hope to see more in the future!! Good luck and Happy Writing!!! Soulkana

I truly loved this poem ^^ Hope to see more from you!! Good luck and Happy Writing!!!!!!!!!! Soulkana

YAY I"M A FORTUNE COOKIE THEY"RE MY FAVORITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But I love my sisie's story much more than a dumb cookie XD good luck sisie and hopefully with my genius your ...

AWESOME SIS!!!!!!!! Am glad I could help you write it XD good luck and happy writing!!! Will be happy to help with chapter 3 when I finish chapter 4 XD ...

Thanks for the reviews guys ^^ hopefully the changes i made have made it better if only a little XD Good luck and Happy Writing!!!!!! Soulkana

Thanks for the reviews you guys^^ hope I managed to fix some parts of it. I will try to fix it more when I have the time ^^ Good luck ...

Its still amazing sister. Hopefully you write chapter 2 soon so I may read XD. Good luck and Happy Writing!!!!! Soulkana

Thanks ^^ it took forever LOLS worked on it all day yesterday and still took me till 11 at night to have it upload >< way too long

Hahaha thanks for the review big brother ^^ glad you like it!!!!

Amazing absolutely AMAZING!!!! I truly loved it and so can't wait for more to read!!! I really hope to read more when I have the time. Good luck and Happy ...