Soulkana

This was a rough draft and I thank you for the reviews. I will fix it later on...most likely during school ^^ I didn't put as much into as I ...

Thanks guys. This is based of something personal. I haven't heard from someone I love dearly in almost four months now...Kinda slowly sinking me into depression. But I have my ...

Hehe loved this a lot. The emotion was impressive and I liked the detail. Sorry I will give a better review later on..can't think of what to say which is ...

Hello, I'm back for a much better review haha. Ok so I loved this idea and think you will do great. I just say need to add details and at ...

Eeh she loved commas....didn't change it since I'm not good with commas man. So I'll fix it and if you want help with the explaining I can send you a ...

Yeah. I love it but if I do change, it will mostly be grammar. She meant a lot and she was amazing with her writing, in my opinion...I really miss ...

I spotted others after I submitted them so I say to read through it and find the sentences and dialogues that don't end with punctuation marks...But other than that there ...

Noooou If ANYONE is gonna eat moi its Alicy!!!! Mwahaha anyways love the story and I need help sis T.T Am on Google Docs

Yay!!!! I"m a fortune cookie!!!!! giggles that means someones going to eat me!!!!???? NOOOOOOO!!!!!!! I don't wanna be eaten T.T Still love the story sister!!!! hugs*

Haha this was better the second time around hahah!! Nice job and keep up the good works ^^ Happy Writing and Best of Wishes. No grammar I could spot but ...

Thanks for the reply and I normally think people would read the first chapters before reading this one. And some are explained in earlier chapters...I think? I can't remember been ...

My point was too bring what starts to happen at the end but this isn't exactly what happens. I don't know how to explain it at all x.x I honestly ...

I underlined what she signed and what she didn't. Hope that helps ^^

Ehh I meant her to seem older; not sure if I did it right or not. Hmm Thanks for the review and I'll try my best x.x Not sure how ...

Thanks once again for the review Tenyo I'll do my best to try and fix the mistakes. Yes I began to notice that and was planning on getting rid of ...