Soulkana

Why is it i I only fall Yet everytime i I do i I hear a call Tellling me to get up to keep going on But I'am as weak ...

This is very good and the descriptions are very vivid which paints a very complete picture in my head. Good luck and I hope you get many helpful reviews. Keep ...

I'm really amazed by this poem!! The story it tell is very well done. Also the descriptions paint a very good picture in my head so that is a good ...

I like this very much. This is very descriptive and the emotion is very clear in this!!! Good luck and I couldn't find any spelling errors nor any grammar mistakes ...

She’s sorry she can’t trust, That’s something she’ll have to rise above. She’s sorry things aren’t what you planned She has trouble making her mind up. She’s sorry there’s a ...

Absolutely BRILLIANT!!! I really loved this. The emotion seemed to be clear with every line and every section. The descriptions painted a very clear picture and mood to this poem. ...

I really like this poem. The emotion just flows in the words and the descriptions paint a very vivid and interesting picture in my mind. It makes me want more ...

L was a strange person. He hardly asked me questions or spoke at all, but that was all right by me. His grey eyes were always glistening when he saw ...

This left me confused very greatly. Sometimes I couldn't see who was talking; you should try and explain before or after the spoken parts who said it. Or else it ...

I really honestly looked for mistakes and since my grammar is rather poor I couldn't see any!! Haha. Anyways I love this very much. It is a very creative and ...

I really loved this!!! I can see the emotion behind this. I can also see a vivid picture from your descriptions. I hope you write more soon so I may ...

This is very good and I loved it. I have only one thing to say try to shorten the lines so it flows smoother...if you can ^^ Otherwise the descriptions ...

Good job. This poem of yours has a lot of descriptions which painted a very vivid picture in my head which is good!! There is very deep emotion in this ...

Awww this was heart melting sad and beautiful!!! The emotion and description is just breathtaking!!! I really have no corrections to this piece at all; hence why I stink at ...

"And the lovebirds still sing As they together take wing;" I would make this two lines right after the sing so Its not the only long line in the whole ...