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Really love this Persephonesia it was beautiful. I can't find anything wrong with this at all so yays!!1 Really loved this and I can't wait to read more of your ...

I liked this very much even if its slightly creepy lols. it had a nice plot but you need to describe more haha. I couldn't find any spelling errors that ...

This made me smile! I really loved this and I hope to red more of your work soon. Your friend sounds really nice and this poem was very sweet I ...

I really enjoyed this my only suggestion is to space paragraphs and dialogues so people don't lose their spot or not know who is speaking the lines. Other than that ...

Laughter bounces off the walls as many merry people meet to do what we all love. Perform. Today, we dance. Swaying, stumbling, panting, falling. Someone stated earlier I don't think ...

I liked this very much and I hope you will fix it. I just wanted to point out maybe you should space paragraphs and dialogues so its easier to read; ...

I liked this Ashley but I have to say you need more emotion in this! Describe lols and normally I don't like describing but this would really shine if you ...

I really loved this and I can't wait to read more of your works!!! There wasn't any grammar mistakes that I could see from here so maybe someone else will ...

Still loving this tinkembell haha. Can't wait for more!!! Please update soon? Haha once again couldn't find any spelling errors nor grammar....I"m just a bit lost when Keira comes in ...

I really liked this!! It gives a different and very compelling tale of angels and I loved it!!! Your descriptions are great and I can't find anything really wrong with ...

Haha I had to read this again I really liked it a second time as well!!! Normally I can't stand to read things twice since I already know what happens...least ...

Hmm I wonder how this will turn out in the end. You described everything great in my opinion I couldn't find any spelling errors nor grammar so that's good. I ...

I reallly liked this and I hope to sincerely read more of your works!!! Keep up the good work. I didn't find any spelling errors at all with this!!! It ...

I like how this is turning out very well!!! Good job and keep up the good work...you described the characters and the scene very well and I could easily picture ...

Hahah you got ALL the stereotypes for us lovely and brooding teenagers. This made me laugh and laugh till I was laughing on the floor unable to stop... very nicely ...