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Re: The composer
I loved it. Everything flowed really nicely. It sounds as though it could be made it into a song or as if it should in a book of poetry. It ...
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Re: Prologue - Fallen Angelle
Much appreciated. Looking at it, it's not really where I want it to be. Or how I want it to be. So, I will take what you said into consideration ...
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Re: Taking The Risk (Chapter 1)
Thank you for the advice on it. I really do need help and don't think it's cruel in anyway. It's a lot nicer than what I have received in the ...
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Re: It was just a cup...
Almost cried towards the end of it when I realized it was his wife's cup. The ending leaves the reader wondering what happened to his wife. I guess the cup ...
Sep 4, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Giving Up Is Liberating
I can't wait to read the other parts of this. I am already interested in it. I mean if there is going to be another part to it. And if ...
Sep 4, 2014 -
Re: The Epidemic: Chapter 1
that would be a very scary thing if it were to really happen. I wouldn't know rather to move away or to stay and board up the house. Or even ...
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Re: [Halberd] Ruby File (2) Jealousy (scrapped)
Really good...Keep up the good work.
Sep 4, 2014 - Re: Prologue Sep 4, 2014
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Re: The Cold Within: Chapter 1: Journal
Had to scan it before actually reading it. I really did like it. Not all readings catch my eye like yours did.
Sep 4, 2014