Soulfulwriter

I loved it. Everything flowed really nicely. It sounds as though it could be made it into a song or as if it should in a book of poetry. It ...

Much appreciated. Looking at it, it's not really where I want it to be. Or how I want it to be. So, I will take what you said into consideration ...

Thank you for the advice on it. I really do need help and don't think it's cruel in anyway. It's a lot nicer than what I have received in the ...

Almost cried towards the end of it when I realized it was his wife's cup. The ending leaves the reader wondering what happened to his wife. I guess the cup ...

I can't wait to read the other parts of this. I am already interested in it. I mean if there is going to be another part to it. And if ...

that would be a very scary thing if it were to really happen. I wouldn't know rather to move away or to stay and board up the house. Or even ...

Really good...Keep up the good work.

Had to scan it before actually reading it. I really did like it. Not all readings catch my eye like yours did.