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Llya

  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: The Dogs' Revenge

    At first the title made me laugh, A Dog’s Revenge, I have never heard of dogs actually not being too happy with the way things are. Maybe except for the ...

    Sep 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: "The Ones Crafted by You"

    It seems like you really value people who can be themselves and not someone that they are not. Or you love that people have all kind of thoughts and people ...

    Sep 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: One More Stupid Love Song

    I do love the way the whole rhyming thing that is going on in the poem. I can’t really say much about the poem itself. It is really good. I ...

    Sep 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: A Spark in the Cold Darkness

    I truly do love the short stories. I must say that I don't really do the whole editing thing when it comes to people's stories and such. Not really much ...

    Sep 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Cross

    I am not really good with telling people what needs to be fixed or what's missing. I don't think I have enough experience for that kind of thing. The only ...

    Sep 5, 2014
  • Other » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Excutioners

    NOOO! Where is the rest of it? I know it's around here somewhere. I will find it. It's really good and not much catches and holds my interest, but your ...

    Sep 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Save You, Save Me [Edited]

    I love the beginning. I bet some kids wished they could do that to save their mom or siblings. But sometimes the guys can be so ruthless no matter who ...

    Sep 4, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: I Swear I Lived

    I think this needs to be put in every magazine in the world. It's very inspirational and has this emotion that I believe young girls can relate to. It speaks ...

    Sep 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Eating Grasshoppers

    Story reminded me of a dare. I and my cousins dared another cousin to lick a worm from out of the garden. She did it, but we sort of figured ...

    Sep 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The stage

    Loved it, I was about to scream "No...don't sell your soul." But realized that I was reading and not watching television. Everything flowed nicely, that's my own opinion. Didn't really ...

    Sep 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Should have taken it back

    There is a lot of emotion with this story. How she feels about the girl that use to be her best friend. I can really relate to this, except the ...

    Sep 4, 2014


“Sorry about the blood in your mouth. I wish it was mine. I couldn't get the boy to kill me, but I wore his jacket for the longest time.”
— Richard Siken