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Re: The Dogs' Revenge
At first the title made me laugh, A Dog’s Revenge, I have never heard of dogs actually not being too happy with the way things are. Maybe except for the ...
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Re: "The Ones Crafted by You"
It seems like you really value people who can be themselves and not someone that they are not. Or you love that people have all kind of thoughts and people ...
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Re: One More Stupid Love Song
I do love the way the whole rhyming thing that is going on in the poem. I can’t really say much about the poem itself. It is really good. I ...
Sep 10, 2014 -
Re: A Spark in the Cold Darkness
I truly do love the short stories. I must say that I don't really do the whole editing thing when it comes to people's stories and such. Not really much ...
Sep 5, 2014 -
Re: Cross
I am not really good with telling people what needs to be fixed or what's missing. I don't think I have enough experience for that kind of thing. The only ...
Sep 5, 2014 -
Re: Excutioners
NOOO! Where is the rest of it? I know it's around here somewhere. I will find it. It's really good and not much catches and holds my interest, but your ...
Sep 4, 2014 -
Re: Save You, Save Me [Edited]
I love the beginning. I bet some kids wished they could do that to save their mom or siblings. But sometimes the guys can be so ruthless no matter who ...
Sep 4, 2014 -
Re: I Swear I Lived
I think this needs to be put in every magazine in the world. It's very inspirational and has this emotion that I believe young girls can relate to. It speaks ...
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Re: Eating Grasshoppers
Story reminded me of a dare. I and my cousins dared another cousin to lick a worm from out of the garden. She did it, but we sort of figured ...
Sep 4, 2014 -
Re: The stage
Loved it, I was about to scream "No...don't sell your soul." But realized that I was reading and not watching television. Everything flowed nicely, that's my own opinion. Didn't really ...
Sep 4, 2014 -
Re: Should have taken it back
There is a lot of emotion with this story. How she feels about the girl that use to be her best friend. I can really relate to this, except the ...
Sep 4, 2014
