SophieSaysWriting

Thanks, I know I need to work on my dialogue, your suggestions helped a lot!

This was my first Poem, so I'm not very good :). Thanks for the review I'll take that into account!

Thank you!!!!! :)

Thanks for taking the time to read my work

Thank you so much! That made my day :)

Thanks!

Thanks!

Even with the "Dark" undertone it's still really good. Thanks for writing.

Thanks ;). I know it was riddled with mistakes! I didn't look through it before submitting lol.

Really good story!

Thanks for the review I'll look into my mistakes.

Thanks! I'll look into that

WOW! I loved it can't wait for the next chapter!

Awesome can't wait to read

I have no words for this. It got me right away, it has a nice bitter sweet to it.