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Thanks for your compliments, Ziggie. I don't so much mind not doing the quote justice, as I think this piece comes more from an experience than from the quote - ...

It's the "careful not to force the rhymes too much." that I was most worried about. And the stuff like that which you put in bold is mostly the stuff ...

Hmmm. So you reckon it's too basic? I meant to say: This is from a novel I'm writing. Three of the character's have a poem included, written by them. This ...

"So high, in my, lovely ivory tower of Babel. Babble, babble... etc" - Godspell. Woo! Sorry. I've nothing constructive to say right this second...

All I can say is that this is the (for want of a much better word) cutest thing I've read in a very long time. And I did not mean ...

Awesome advice. Pretty obvious thing to be lacking and yet I missed it. It's probably all the badly chosen poetry we're studying in English Lit, it's drained all the imagery ...

Woo!! Ben Folds! (Swear I'm not stalking you) And btw, I can imagine this sung over weird Cohen/Dylan style simple chords and random picking. Like it. But too tried to ...

I can see this song in a Ben Folds kind of style, listen to some of his stuff. Ben Folds!! Wooo!

What on earth made you go calling this up from the burning pits of the past?? I'm actually quite grateful though, I could do things with this. And thank you ...

Love it The chrous sounds irritating, but you can't tell til you've heard it right?

That's freakishly like me. That's just me. and the Snow Patrol and half smoked cigarettes! Freaky. It's me!

Then at least put: 'cause

I guess during the time of my posting this i got beat to first place so go figure hahah Seems so...

Ok.... I see something's going on here....... Would someone who's in on this who thing please PM me and explain??!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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