SophiaBurnette

This is a very well written chapter! I love how the action keeps going. It really sucks readers in and holds their attention. I love your characters, David and Silvia. ...

Thank you for posting this! I think I'll go see Crazy, Stupid, Love now! It's good to know that Steve Carrel has once again done a great job. I'm not ...

First of all, I really like your title. "Inter" as you probably know, is the Latin word for "between", which is very appropriate. I loved your story. It takes a ...

I loved the suspense and the action! Your style is one that draws the reader in, which is key in good (and addicting) writing. It will keep readers hooked and ...

I like where this is going. The beginning is very sad, but that's good because your character has some very realistic emotional baggage, which I'm assuming will come into play ...

Ouch! I really feel the speaker's pain and frustration at being rejected. The rhyme and rhythm are both very common, but that's okay because something common is a good base ...

This is a very good poem. It's well paced with clear meaning. Your poem has a vaguely musical quality to it, which makes it very readable. I can't really think ...

This is very good! You are good at creating suspense and moving the plot well. That said, you could have made the chapter a little longer, or built the suspense ...

Hey, I love this story. It's very cute and quite true to life. Most of your grammar was addressed in the last review, so I'll talk about format. Your format ...

What I liked: The impressionism. I like how your poem bounce around, but it wasn't too all over the place. All the ideas in here still add up to one ...

I really like where this story is going! Are the missing/killed child and the wolf connected? Did the wold kill the child? OH THE SUSPENSE!…Suspense and loose ends are really ...

Wow, I see why you posted the image! The format was brilliant and really helped express the poem. For the first few lines, I didn't quite understand what was going ...

Very strong and solid, but not overly rigid. The metric scheme was uneven…but I liked it! It fit in well with the artistic form of the poem. I especially like ...

I love this poem! It has a strong message that people understand and (unfortunately) endure every day. The rhyme scheme is simple, but that works well for the poem. Maybe ...