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Kajal went to the Internet cafe because he was desperate and this was his only hope. Of course he knew from the beginning that he didn't understand computers, but perhaps ...

Thanks for the review! When it says "The woman, whose name was Hone-Onna...", this isn't Kajal knowing her name. I've switched to the narrator's voice. Since this confused you, I ...

Bahaha! When I read "'63 miles per hour' is too exact for me", I burst out laughing and looked back at the quote to see if I'd actually written that. ...

Hello, my friend! I'm happy to see you're reading this. :D I tried to write it in such a way that people who have never seen Jigoku Shoujo would be ...

Thanks for all your reviews, Chaser! I promise I'll get around to editing them sometime, but I'm traveling overseas soon, and I don't know what my Internet situation will be ...

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Amazing. It's amazing how you used the very rhythm of this poem to convey meaning almost as much as the words themselves. I read it three times, and then I ...

If you feel like you need to take a break, I think you should. I wouldn't say your quality of writing has changed, but if you don't feel a sense ...

Thanks so much! You have some of the most helpful reviews. I've been trying lately to bring more description into my stories, because I've always emphasized dialogue and now feel ...

Yaaay! Yes, please do.

So sorry! I didn't mean to triple-post!

Yes, I was aware that they were just outside the hospital to begin with, but for some reason, the Wendy's seagulls made me imagine a scene change. Maybe it's because ...

Yes, I was aware that they were just outside the hospital to begin with, but for some reason, the Wendy's seagulls made me imagine a scene change. Maybe it's because ...

Yes, I was aware that they were just outside the hospital to begin with, but for some reason, the Wendy's seagulls made me imagine a scene change. Maybe it's because ...

Oh, I'll definitely read more!

Yaay! I get to read the missing pieces of "The Locksmith"! I'm excited. I really like the story and the setting, and I really like Lav. Her reaction to her ...