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Re: Joab's Song
I did! It was my first attempt to make a real drawing (as opposed to a practice sketch) using some tips my roomate in college gave me. She's great at ...
Dec 16, 2015 -
Re: Dirty Streets Chapter Four (Jigoku Shoujo)
OMG, YWS did not handle my Russian keyboard characters very well at all, hahaha.
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: Dirty Streets Chapter Four (Jigoku Shoujo)
"That "that scene", I meant the scene in which Kajal types Hakim's name into the website. Also, if the phrase "You don't need to be confused" sounded at all weird ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: Dirty Streets Chapter Four (Jigoku Shoujo)
Thanks for the useful advice and whatnot! A few things in response: You don't need to be confused on how long Kajal has known Hakim. In the first chapter, it ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: The Men Who Stole the Stars
And do do do do do let Ahmad be shaken at the end! Even the least impressionable people have moments where everything suddenly seems wrong and strange, and when those ...
Dec 8, 2015 -
Re: The Men Who Stole the Stars
No time now, but as I was about to close the webpage, the title of this story caught my eye! I'm putting it on my "to read" list!
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: The Giving Curse Chapter 1
Hi! Sorry for the late response. I had to take a bit of time to mull over a few of your questions. It looks to me like Ruma is such ...
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: Insult to Injury Part Seven (Jigoku Shoujo The Saved and the Damned)
Thanks for reading, and for all the reviews! Actually, Janet and Michelle and everyone except for Enma Ai and her three helpers are my own characters. The way the anime ...
Dec 3, 2015 -
Re: Insult to Injury Part Four (Jigoku Shoujo The Saved and the Damned)
I want to change that last line too. >_< Just haven't got around to it. The situation, by the way, is quite real. I was actually inspired to write this ...
Dec 1, 2015 -
Re: Insult to Injury Part Three (Jigoku Shoujo The Saved and the Damned)
That's quite a compliment! Now, my "own" stories are all talking teddy bears, and sprightly wanderers, and fairies and elves, and philosophically-inclined tyrants massacring entire races...yeah, they
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: Insult to Injury Part Three (Jigoku Shoujo The Saved and the Damned)
"That really describes you well as a writer"...Ouch. It describes my fanfiction writing, more like. I promise that my own stories are mostly not nearly this heartless, but when I ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: Insult to Injury Part Two (Jigoku Shoujo The Saved and the Damned)
Kikiki, I've been trying to control my "suddenly" addiction a bit, but it's hard. :P I think it really does happen that the police ask the parents to identify the ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: Home
Hi, Arkhaion~ I wish I had time to leave a long, well-thought-out review, but as of now, I can't. I just had a random craving to read an Arkhaion composition. ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Dirty Streets Chapter Five (Jigoku Shoujo)
Thanks! That's all really helpful! :D
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Dirty Streets Chapter Four (Jigoku Shoujo)
Thanks for the constructive criticism! I'll give that transition a close look and see what I can do about it. Now that you mention it, it does seem a bit ...
Nov 29, 2015
