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Re: Crazy Little Love Story (3) Apologize
"La-La-La-La! La-La-La-La! Elmo's World!" That was, um, not how I expected the chapter to begin. In fact, I don't think I ever could have predicted it. Very surprising, hahaha. And ...
Feb 3, 2016 -
Re: Crazy Little Love Story (2) Enter Eden Sioux
I ran as hard and as fast as my legs could carry me with the weight of this girl slung over my shoulder and slobber all over my favorite cardigan. ...
Feb 3, 2016 -
Re: Crazy Little Love Story (1) Enter Katie Holm
Hey! I'm looking for another YWS chapter story to start getting into, since the chapter stories seem to get left behind in the Green Room. They take a bit of ...
Feb 3, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 31 *
“God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and wisdom to know the difference,” she said in a calm ...
Feb 3, 2016 -
Re: Smoke and Nails
Ooh, I really love how this is starting out, and--oh my gosh, I love camping~ I was sensing the mood from the first paragraph. The letter had been picked up ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 30
I had to take a break after the last chapter, but I think I'm ready to pick it up again. As I entered this chapter, an inexplicable feeling came over ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 29
Here I am at Chapter Twenty-Nine! I feel some anticipation, since you said you were specifically interested in what my reaction would be to this chapter...We shall see. Was I ...
Jan 25, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 28
Wow...Three weeks...Toby's been battling over opening that card for three weeks. I can just feel his anxiety. You described it so well. I jolted up from my slumber, my heart ...
Jan 19, 2016 -
Re: The story of my life from a comfy chair
Oh, wow. I'm just kind of sitting here, trying to process all this. Sometimes I do reviews by recording my real-time reactions, like writing in the margins of a book, ...
Jan 18, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 27
Oh man! Toby didn't let Mario tell him who killed his father! Wasn't that his last chance? How will he ever find out now? :( “Ha. Bless the night janitor ...
Jan 15, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 26
I saw that another chapter was up and made a mental note to read it as soon as possible. :) I'm really excited to find out Melissa's story. Here we ...
Jan 11, 2016 -
Re: Ah ha ha I don't care
Hi! I wanted to write just one more review on Review Day, but I'm a bit emotionally and mentally exhausted, so I wanted to find something shorter. A poem. Thus, ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Every Christmas - Chapter 6
Ah, this is nice. When I first clicked on this in the Green Room, I read the first paragraph and didn't know the context. Now that I know the story ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Every Christmas - Chapter 5
What? Whole eggs in the blender? A piece of the carton? I was as baffled as Emily at the beginning of this chapter. What could he possibly be cooking up? ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Every Christmas - Chapter 4
Okay, seriously now. Why is the Doctor being referred to as a teenager? Is it just that he looks like a teenager? But in that case, who was that child ...
Dec 30, 2015
