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Sonder

beautifully and wonderfully made

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: on goes life

    Thank you. Yes, lack of grammar was intentional, thanks for not hating me. :P

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: on goes life

    Thanks Nargles! I will definitely look into that. :)

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Lights, Cameras...

    Thanks Nargles! I will look into that. :)

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: Face of War

    It was, you did well with constructive criticism. :) I will work on this. Thanks again.

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: Face of War

    Thank you for the awesome review. Very constructive, I appreciate it. I was kind of hesitant to post this because it is a rough topic and I was trying something ...

    Apr 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Lights, Cameras...

    Oh, thank you. I will definitely change that. :P Thanks again!

    Apr 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: on goes life

    Thanks for the review! :)

    Apr 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Lights, Cameras...

    Thank you!

    Apr 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Rewind

    Awesome much better. :)

    Apr 13, 2014
  • Other » Spiritual, General Re: Crossroads

    Hmm, maybe so. I do feel like this needs more happy mixed in. :) Thanks again! That really helped.

    Mar 25, 2014
  • Other » Spiritual, General Re: Crossroads

    Thanks Teen! I worked really hard on this and challenged myself with vocab. Any suggestions on how I can make my theme clearer, since both you and Mess didn't get ...

    Mar 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: freedom

    :)

    Mar 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Theatre, Dramatic Re: Ignorance

    No problem! That's what I assumed was going on, it just wasn't completely clear. It was great, though. :)

    Mar 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: freedom

    Thanks Lipton!

    Mar 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: freedom

    Thanks for the review, Sunshine! I did the punctuation and no-capitalization bit on purpose. I felt that it fit better, but that's just me. :) Thanks again.

    Mar 22, 2014


Look, a good poem is a poem that exists. Any poem you write is better than the poem you don't.
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