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Re: Connect the Dots
And thank you for sharing your poem! :D Likewise!
May 25, 2015 -
Re: Connect the Dots
This poem made me realize that I have this disorder. I think I have it much more mild than you, and I'm so sorry for your pain. During times of ...
May 24, 2015 -
Re: learning to drown
Thanks!
May 24, 2015 -
Re: learning to drown
Well, I understand the frustration with teachers. It's alright, just please try to be more cautious with poems like this! Teens are angsty, we're going to write poems about death. ...
May 23, 2015 -
Re: learning to drown
Thank you!
May 22, 2015 -
Re: learning to drown
Thank you very much for the constructive review! I'll keep that in mind! :)
May 22, 2015 -
Re: learning to drown
Thank you Lylas! I'll keep that in mind. :)
May 22, 2015 -
Re: learning to drown
Hey Verser! I felt that your review wasn't very respectful, nor helpful at all. This poem is not a literal story of drowning, but rather a representation of something quite ...
May 22, 2015 -
Re: learning to drown
Thanks for the suggestions, Divya! Some tips for your future reviewing of poetry: This is called free verse poetry. This means that no rhythm or rhyme scheme or set lines ...
May 21, 2015 -
Re: learning to drown
Thank you!
May 21, 2015 -
Re: learning to drown
Thank you! :)
May 20, 2015 -
Re: Predictable Unpredictability
Thank you! :)
May 16, 2015 -
Re: when passions turn to obsessions
Hey donizback. :) Thanks for the review. Uh...your suggestion with the "an" would be wrong, as the context I have it in is plural, and right now I believe it ...
May 11, 2015 -
Re: it was her smile
Stunning.
May 11, 2015 -
Re: when passions turn to obsessions
Thank you!
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