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beautifully and wonderfully made

  • Poetry » General, Health Re: Connect the Dots

    And thank you for sharing your poem! :D Likewise!

    May 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Health Re: Connect the Dots

    This poem made me realize that I have this disorder. I think I have it much more mild than you, and I'm so sorry for your pain. During times of ...

    May 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: learning to drown

    Thanks!

    May 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: learning to drown

    Well, I understand the frustration with teachers. It's alright, just please try to be more cautious with poems like this! Teens are angsty, we're going to write poems about death. ...

    May 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: learning to drown

    Thank you!

    May 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: learning to drown

    Thank you very much for the constructive review! I'll keep that in mind! :)

    May 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: learning to drown

    Thank you Lylas! I'll keep that in mind. :)

    May 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: learning to drown

    Hey Verser! I felt that your review wasn't very respectful, nor helpful at all. This poem is not a literal story of drowning, but rather a representation of something quite ...

    May 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: learning to drown

    Thanks for the suggestions, Divya! Some tips for your future reviewing of poetry: This is called free verse poetry. This means that no rhythm or rhyme scheme or set lines ...

    May 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: learning to drown

    Thank you!

    May 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: learning to drown

    Thank you! :)

    May 20, 2015
  • Other » Other, General Re: Predictable Unpredictability

    Thank you! :)

    May 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: when passions turn to obsessions

    Hey donizback. :) Thanks for the review. Uh...your suggestion with the "an" would be wrong, as the context I have it in is plural, and right now I believe it ...

    May 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: it was her smile

    Stunning.

    May 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: when passions turn to obsessions

    Thank you!

    May 10, 2015


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