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Oh goodness, this is exactly what I needed. This piece is wildly unedited, but I couldn't decide what needed to be cut or altered, exactly. I agree that the first ...

It's okay, don't feel bad! It goes against all we're taught in school, so it's understandable. :) Thanks for the review!

Hey there! So to explain, this poem is in free verse, which means that no conventional poetry rules apply. The lack of capitalization in this was a stylistic choice and ...

Thanks for the suggestions! He's 10 years old. :)

My childhood.

Yay, sounds like a good plan. ^-^ No prob dude.

Aww, thank you! :)

Haha, sorry. I've been calling my friends lovely for a long time now. XD

Aw. Thanks so much, lovely! That means so much to me. :)

Hey there! Thanks for the review. The stanza that you're wondering about is supposed to represent my mother (as the queen) who's leading this adoption process, and the ladder is ...

Thanks for the review! I definitely agree on the stylistic points, so thanks for pointing that out. :)

No problem! I really liked it, and I think the cursing made sense for character reactions and helped the tone. I'm interested in what happens with Ace then! I was ...

Wow, Strange. This was such an amazing review. I really appreciate you taking time to tell me why you like certain parts so I can keep doing it, as well ...

Thanks for the review! I'll take that into account. :)

Thank you! :)