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GriffinClaw has returned for more amazing work! As usual, your poetry is fabulous. This has a great lesson and flow to it. It has a sort of bitter sweet feel ...

Hi, GriffinClaw back again for more! :) I do think that this chapter needs more revision than the other two, for sure. I found a few typos, and I think ...

Hello, GriffinClaw here again. Obviously your first chapter was great 'cuz I am back for more! I am not going to go into such lengthy detail as last time, it ...

Hi there, GriffinClaw here to review! First off, great beginning! Wow! You did a great job at pulling the reader in and making them want to read more! When you ...

Hi, anna! GriffinClaw here to review the poem! I love this poem. The way that death is a theme throughout this and yet manages to keep the love and bitter ...

Hello, anna! I really enjoyed this poem! I know you probably are getting some crap about the language, but that is kind of the point of your poem! I am ...

This was absolutely beautiful. I'm serious. I felt that every word was meaningful and had thought and purpose. Wow. Wow. I am still reeling, that was so cool. Okay, here ...

I enjoyed this piece very much. I am just wondering, did this actually happen, or was it just symbolism all around? I myself never carry anything more than a five ...

Hi NiteOwl! I really enjoyed this. Do you have music to go with it? I would like to know more background on the song (not written into the song, just ...

This is absolutely a beautiful poem. I know what it is like to go through such a loss, but that doesn't make it any easier on you. I can feel ...

Hello! I love this piece, it is a very clever idea! I am hoping that you plan to write more, because it sounds like it is off to a great ...