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Re: Is It a Dream? Chapter 2 More Confusion
Hey, Malachi! Guess who is back for another... *gasp* REVIEW! As usual, great work! I always love scenes that take place at night, so this was great for me! A ...
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Is It a Dream? Chapter 1 Confusion
Hey, Malachi! Griff, back for more! Oh, wow. I love this! The beginning was interesting, at first I wasn't sure if he was in actual danger or just playing a ...
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: Psalm 23 . . . my meditation on it
Hey Malachi! GriffinClaw, here to review this beautiful work! First off, wow. It takes skill to transform any praise into something unique like this. The rhyming and the rhythm were ...
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: The Lord of the Attic
Fortis, my dear grill. Griffin, here to bore you with a review! First off, I really liked the idea. It was creative and had a twist of humor running throughout ...
Aug 27, 2013 -
Re: Nate the Great.
Dragongirl! Griffin here for a review...sort of. :P I liked this piece! It was cute and did a great job thanking Nate in a playful way. I was confused by ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: SORRY I DONT HAVE A TITTLE YET -CHAPTER 2
Hello, CallMeDee! Griffin, here for a review! First off, I like the idea that this is based of Job (right?) so that gave me the heads-up that things may not ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Unbroken Part 1: Chapter Two
Mmmmmmmm. So good. As per usual. If this is a novel, I am buying it. Favorite part: Dylan's sudden change in emotion when the police knock on the door, and ...
Aug 18, 2013 -
Re: Unbroken Part 1: Chapter One
I'm back. *Maniacal laugh* Anyway, I returned because this is awesome! Very well written, as I said before. I wasn't disappointed. I can't comment on much, simply because it is ...
Aug 18, 2013 -
Re: Unbroken
Rawr! Griff here for a review! Wow. This was really good. You sucked me right in, from the first sentence on. This seems like the type of thing I would ...
Aug 17, 2013 -
Re: Africa
Rawr. Hey, Anna! I really enjoyed this poem. I liked the flow and rhythm, it was calming. I liked how this poem told more of a story than others do. ...
Aug 17, 2013 -
Re: Claire
Hello, neko! Griffin, here for a short review! First off, I really liked the feel of this. I liked the descriptions of the friends and the way the main character ...
Aug 17, 2013 -
Re: I will not die a shell
Ginger. Well. Looks like I have been summoned. Here is...a short review. -.- Though I disagree with what this poem is saying, I enjoyed it. It was well written. I ...
Aug 17, 2013 -
Re: One Last Time
LMJ, Just...wow. This was really well written. The character, the descriptions, the fear was perfectly written. I was held in suspense the entire time, my heart even sped up a ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: Mr. Jerry
Rawr. Heyyyyy umaima! Ahem. Ok. You asked me to review this, so here I am! Yup. To be honest, I liked this poem okay, but I didn't understand the references ...
Aug 3, 2013 -
Re: Deleted
therealme, This piece is stunning, absolutely beautiful. I am having trouble finding words to describe how I truely feel about this work. You are very unique to have written this, ...
Aug 2, 2013
