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The only thing I'll take as criticism from you is the green font. Don't worry that'll be changed, I can see why it would bother some poeple, it just happens ...

LOL thank you from branden!!! that's exactly what I wanted to portray! I understand it sounds like from a man's point of view, but I have no idea why I ...

Oh, wow! No one likes the rhyming? Damn. Ok, Chevy: if you thought it was pathetic because of the rhyming and I should change that to make it a better ...

LOL well power to you!!!! I like that time period too, but I would not have read that for fun. I'm glad my teacher turned me on to it though, ...

i thought it was interesting. then they made us do a similar sermon that evokes feelings on certain issues. we did it on recial hate crimes. i got an A ...

I like it, it kept me hooked all throughout the poem. It's what many teens our ages go through during adolescence and after that too. Very cool.

I don't know, I can't really say I fully understood it. I suppose I'm going through a brain fart.

Well, it does for me! lol I don't know, a sense of humor and laughter are an aphrodisiac for me, especially when it comes from the right person. Just like ...

Well, thanks for the constructive criticism and I'll try to take your suggestions into considerations. =) toodlez!

I really do think you should add some elaboration on it. You shouldn't have to explain the poem to the reader, and if you somehow include that of the grandmother ...

I know exactly how you feel, because I can say truthfully "Been there, done that." I know that kind of pain all too well, but in the end it all ...

That boy's incredible lucky to have that father. When I think of all the kids these days that have a father and their dads couldn't care less about them it ...