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  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The Other Side

    Wow, that ending definitely took me by surprise. What I think is really amazing about this piece is that in about five paragraphs, you kind of summarized a life and ...

    Jun 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: An experiment

    Firstly, great job on such a creative,unique idea. Formatting the story as a journal was a such a great move and makes you get to know the character on level ...

    Jun 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: An experiment

    Firstly, great job on such a creative,unique idea. Formatting the story as a journal was a such a great move and makes you get to know the character on level ...

    Jun 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: An experiment

    Firstly, great job on such a creative,unique idea. Formatting the story as a journal was a such a great move and makes you get to know the character on level ...

    Jun 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Tick Tock

    Thanks so much for reading and for such a supportive review!

    Apr 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Tick Tock

    Thanks so much for reading and for such a supportive review!

    Apr 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: Barbie Dolls

    I really like this a lot. This is a great (and an important) premise for a story. By the end of it I actually worry for the narrator. What lengths ...

    Mar 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: What is the Point?

    You turned flack into inspiration to write more. Kudos! A lot of people would have done the opposite and stopped writing those kinds of poems (or stopped posting) but you ...

    Mar 31, 2016
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Tick Tock

    Thank you so much for reading and for such positive feedback! - Sofia

    Mar 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: The Clock Struck Midnight

    Thanks so much for reading and for the review!

    Mar 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: The Clock Struck Midnight

    Hey! Thanks for reading and for such a detailed review! It's really going to help when editing the story. Thanks!

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: The Clock Struck Midnight

    Hey! Thanks for reading and for giving such a detailed review. It's really going to help when editing the story. Thanks!

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: Term of respect.

    Hey! Thank you so much for reading and for giving such well-thought-out feedback. It will be so helpful when editing the story in the future! Thanks again :)

    Feb 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: Term of respect.

    Hey, thanks for reading! I'm so glad I got a review from someone in Latin America! Thank you so much for letting me know about the accents and for all ...

    Feb 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: Term of respect.

    Hey, thanks so much for reading and for the kind feedback :)

    Feb 6, 2016


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