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  • Short Story » Narrative, Satire Re: Enforced Happiness

    omg i keep double sending it

    Oct 29, 2020
  • Short Story » Narrative, Satire Re: Enforced Happiness

    This is great! Amazing visualization of what happiness would look like forced! The rating was fine, kids add curse words to their vocabulary in fifth 😂. Not disappointing at all!

    Oct 29, 2020
  • Short Story » Narrative, Satire Re: Enforced Happiness

    This is great! Amazing visualization of what happiness would look like forced! The rating was fine, kids add curse words to their vocabulary in fifth 😂. Not disappointing at all!

    Oct 29, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Ayna - The Mirror (Chapter 01)

    Yay! I'm super excited! I understand that it will take a while, because of academics, I'm in school too, so i've got a bit of that, but when it does ...

    Oct 27, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: a hazy shade of winter

    NP! Great job! omg i accidentally sent that twice :D oops sorry!

    Oct 27, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: a hazy shade of winter

    Hi @uwubamba! This is really nice, and powerful, and since my ELA teacher was going on and on about foreshadowing, I think this uses that technique very nicely. I like ...

    Oct 27, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Ayna - The Mirror (Chapter 01)

    That's super intriguing! Can you write a sequel!?

    Oct 27, 2020
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: Notorious RBG

    One thing I laughed at, Chris: "Hey, Vil! Just saw this and thought to give it a review. I don't know much about RBG and I'm just learned about him ...

    Oct 21, 2020
  • Art » Teen Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Bakit Ang Kyot Mo (A Unique Salonga Fan Fiction)

    Oh wow! Do you speak it fluently, or did you forget to include google translate in your bibliography? Kidding XD

    Oct 21, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Chapter One: Lost in the Mall

    Good job! this seems pretty interesting! Excited to see where you take this in the next chapters! Keep writing! Please update soon!!

    Oct 16, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Ghost Bro

    Nice! Like the twist ending!

    Oct 15, 2020
  • Art » Teen Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Bakit Ang Kyot Mo (A Unique Salonga Fan Fiction)

    if you were to translate this to traditional english, then more readers would understand it, and it would get more reviews and likes and stars. It's really puzzling, this poem ...

    Oct 14, 2020
  • Art » Humor, Realistic Re: a two point perspective that i did in 20 minutes

    "i've been to a lot of art classes through scholarships and stuff, so i've had a lot of teaching" Aha! You got a million art scholarships! Not very surprised %uD83D%uDE04

    Oct 14, 2020
  • Art » Humor, Realistic Re: a two point perspective that i did in 20 minutes

    Thanks so much!

    Oct 14, 2020


Sometimes poetry is inspired by the conversation entered into by reading other poems.
— John Barton