Snowery

Your atual conclusion is okay, the problem is that your concluding sentence from each body paragraph is really repetitive, I would just scrap it.

Yay!! I'm so glad :) The back story was good! It was the bones of the actual story! :)

Thank you so much!! :D

Hey Gaurav! I won't really give this a review because there's been a lot of detailed reviews and I think everyone else has mentioned what needs to be mentioned. So ...

No worries! Also when including more religions or referring to the homophobic population as a whole it'll prevent people from accusing of you targeting a specific group or religion.

Yay!! :) *Grins*

*whispers* I still haven't let go of my teddy bear. I love him too much :')

Your Milo saving kittens comment killed me!! :D :D

Hey Silver! Thank you so much for reviewing my work! :) It's nice to see that you're finally doing some reviews :) (though you have a long way to go ...

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!! Really, what an awesome achievement! A full novel and a good one too! :D I'm really hoping to see a sequel, one from Vivianne's point of view would be ...

No worries. I just wanted to say also that I loved the layering you did with the different timelines and how the stories almost folded into each other. I that ...

Hey I don't think I can review this but I just wanted to let you know that I thought that your story was awesome and really beautiful :)

Thanks Trina! :) I'm personally a big fan of third person so I'm glad you liked it :D Thanks again! :)

Hey Zontafer! Thanks so much for your review! It is kind of nice to get a completely positive review :) You pointed out some really interesting things. Thanks again! You've ...

Thanks :)