Young Writers Society

Hi there! Snowery here to give you a review :) I did enjoy this. It was a nice light read and I liked that you were trying to express a ...

Hey Timmy! Snow here for a review :) So I’ll get straight to it. There are mainly two things that I want to address, firstly: Structure and Wording Is brilliant. ...

First of all a huge welcome to YWS! I just know you're going to love it here :) Okay so I'm here to review your story, to tell you what ...

Hey Briky :) It's been a while hey? You might not remember this but I did say that I'd like to return the favour and try to review your works. ...

Hey Aria, *smiles sheepishly* First of all let me just tell you that reviewing this piece has been on my mind for months now, but fingers can feel like lead ...

Sherri! I'm sorry it's been a while (a really long while :/ ) but I'm back to review another of your wonderful chapters! :) Main Points She staggered through the ...

Okay! I saw this and was like "I am so reviewing this even though I am totally not a sci-fi person". So if my comments seem a little out of ...

Hey Jay! I'm back to review another one! So one of the things I've noticed about this chapter is that the dialogue is pretty well done. What i thought though, ...

Hey JayeC! Your adoptive parent here to review for you! This is probably going to be a really short review seeing as the chapter itself is quite short. Also I ...

Hey Scarli! Sorry it's taken me so long to get to this chapter, I've been a little busy lately. This is going to be quite a short review, mainly because ...

*sings “Scarli” in a sing son voice* Main Points him, blocking out even the slow clip-clop So I'm going to start harping on about your descriptions again. I just love ...

Scarli, fellow Aussie here to review for you! :) Main Points Taranis Oooh! Love this name!! Taranis turned away from the treeline You set up the setting here quite brilliantly ...

Hey JayeC! Silver here to review your novel, which I've adopted! :) Main Points His spirit was mine. First off, what an awesome beginning! It's really engaging and really held ...

Hey Scarli! I don't really have much to say for this chapter, probably because it was really good :) So I'll just go through some quick general comments. First, it ...

Scar! Sup yo? XD Main Points A nice little flashback you gave us here of what had happened with the whole Devon stealing Brynn's magic thing. I like the characterisation ...