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  • Article / Essay » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: The Devoted Artist

    Hi there! Snowery here to give you a review :) I did enjoy this. It was a nice light read and I liked that you were trying to express a ...

    May 14, 2015

  • Short Story » Dramatic, General
    Re: Love

    Hey Timmy! Snow here for a review :) So I’ll get straight to it. There are mainly two things that I want to address, firstly: Structure and Wording Is brilliant. ...

    Apr 25, 2015

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Reflection in the Water

    First of all a huge welcome to YWS! I just know you're going to love it here :) Okay so I'm here to review your story, to tell you what ...

    Apr 23, 2015

  • Short Story » Humor, General
    Re: The Amazing...

    Hey Briky :) It's been a while hey? You might not remember this but I did say that I'd like to return the favour and try to review your works. ...

    Apr 16, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other
    Re: Fading Fairytales - a floating scene from later on

    Hey Aria, *smiles sheepishly* First of all let me just tell you that reviewing this piece has been on my mind for months now, but fingers can feel like lead ...

    Apr 6, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Reaper In Black -- Chapter Nine

    Sherri! I'm sorry it's been a while (a really long while :/ ) but I'm back to review another of your wonderful chapters! :) Main Points She staggered through the ...

    Oct 10, 2014


  • Okay! I saw this and was like "I am so reviewing this even though I am totally not a sci-fi person". So if my comments seem a little out of ...

    Sep 24, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Rifted - Chapter III - First And Last

    Hey Jay! I'm back to review another one! So one of the things I've noticed about this chapter is that the dialogue is pretty well done. What i thought though, ...

    Sep 15, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Rifted - Chapter II - The Watchers

    Hey JayeC! Your adoptive parent here to review for you! This is probably going to be a really short review seeing as the chapter itself is quite short. Also I ...

    Sep 15, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other
    Re: Omens Of Disgrace - Chapter Seven

    Hey Scarli! Sorry it's taken me so long to get to this chapter, I've been a little busy lately. This is going to be quite a short review, mainly because ...

    Sep 14, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other
    Re: Omens of Disgrace - Chapter Six

    *sings “Scarli” in a sing son voice* Main Points him, blocking out even the slow clip-clop So I'm going to start harping on about your descriptions again. I just love ...

    Sep 2, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other
    Re: Omens of Disgrace - Chapter Five

    Scarli, fellow Aussie here to review for you! :) Main Points Taranis Oooh! Love this name!! Taranis turned away from the treeline You set up the setting here quite brilliantly ...

    Sep 2, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Rifted - Chapter I - Weakness

    Hey JayeC! Silver here to review your novel, which I've adopted! :) Main Points His spirit was mine. First off, what an awesome beginning! It's really engaging and really held ...

    Aug 31, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other
    Re: Omens of Disgrace - Chapter Four

    Hey Scarli! I don't really have much to say for this chapter, probably because it was really good :) So I'll just go through some quick general comments. First, it ...

    Aug 31, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other
    Re: Omens of Disgrace - Chapter Three

    Scar! Sup yo? XD Main Points A nice little flashback you gave us here of what had happened with the whole Devon stealing Brynn's magic thing. I like the characterisation ...

    Aug 31, 2014


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