Snoink

It's not depressing. She isn't a depressed girl -- just someone with a lot of energy to spare and without an outlet to do so. Now, if you're talking about ...

You were always such a pretty poet. :) I think this is one of your best.

But really... he does have his faults. He can't hold the angel. Did you see him sweating once he held it? I actually didn't notice that, mainly because I'm slightly ...

While I like Kashmiel, he is a perfect character. Where's the faults? Does he at least twiddle his thumbs when he's thinking? Mortal or not, he should have some type ...

Chapter 2 It was painful to walk. Every step was an obstacle. His lungs felt like they had been clamped shut, and he gripped at his sides, gasping. He could ...

She was nervous. The room had an adjoining bathroom, so as soon as the man walked out, she crept in there and began to turn the knobs. She had expected, ...

HAHA! Er... sorry. You got away with it in the beginning, because it felt more like a prologue. But guess what, Missy? It ain't working now. What you're doing is ...

Don't be so cynical. ;) Every poem is different, but another one you make can be just as good.

Haha. I love taking showers, and my parents always complain that their showers are icy because of mine. Sometimes they shut off the water and stuff which makes it REALLY ...

Well... okay, I suppose I didn't like the POV. It was like, do we have to know every stinking comment that goes in his mind??? I mean, if you did ...

XD Oh come on... What you have to do with those kind of characters is the SLAM DOWN! method. That's what you do with the character, not make him an ...

It is very powerful. Slightly disturbing too -- it feels like you're yelling at me. Which is a rare feeling for me to get when I read anything. The raw ...

Wow.... this was awesome. I like how it reminds me of lounge singers. You've captured the feeling very well, I think. :D

What the...? Why did spellcheck say it was right? What the hell was I spelling? *grumbles about how stupid Word is* Er... Jiggy, can you explain your complaint about those ...

This is a pretty poem. There are some rhymes in here, (make/derogate, demise/lies) and I was wondering whether they were intentional or not. But pretty poem. And nice imagery.