Snoink

The ending seemed to scare me... I mean... seriously... it scared me... Oh my god I'm so scared... Oh god... Was it JUST roleplay she was doing with the dolls ...

Texas Instruments rues the day it met an HP in terms of Calculus ;) Keep it comin' Griffy Poo! Speaking of which, there should probably be a mud wrestling match ...

Though you can easily do 2nd + 7 with the same stuff...

For those who don't know, "integrate" is an order for a calculus command. Grif and I are taking a calculus course. The rest of the class dropped -- we're the ...

Um...have to agree with everyone else here. I know you're a great poet, but I'd have to say this wasn't one of your better attempts. It was just too... blunt ...

Yeah, I can imagine it now... "Grif, I don't think you're portraying me right," Snoink said. "What?" Grif said. "You call me the Pink Leader. That's fine and all, but ...

Oooh! I love the imagery! The blurred posters of past legends... this is good stuff! The last sentence/paragraph makes it! "For six panic filled stairs he bored until he passed ...

*twitches* My favorite lines are the first two and the last line. The rest is not very good. Especially when you mention the "dick" part. It's one of those "wtf" ...

I thought you were directionally challenged, Mesh? :? Hehe... maybe she should drive just for a plot twist! We would find ourselves on Pluto in no time!

*shrugs* It's only for fun. :P If it makes you feel better, I have a slight suspicion that freakforchrist and I am going to battle ... with me losing. Don't ...

Okay! Now I put the design up for the whole site, and it's looking prety (in my computer/browser/whatever) sweet, so I'm happy. Any additional thoughts on the layout, the ease ...

LOL! Poor DQ...

Actually, this is known as a list poem. So it is a real type of poetry! More like a "silly" type, but yes, real nonetheless. :)

Aww... this is so pretty! ...yep. That's all I have to say. The edited version was very nice.

When you put a piece up on Nonfiction, you're inviting critiques. ^_^ Instead of posting them here, why not create a blog? YWS allows every one of its users to ...