Snoink

Okay... hear me out! OUTLINES. They are actually wonderful, lol. Trust me on this! If you don't like what you have planned, you can totally change it, but outlines!

...okay, hear me out. When Sunny encounters her big trial and tribulation, a group of variapets that she has befriended come to help her out... :)

OMG. YES. Can you just imagine??? And suddenly, Adelore heard a familiar noise. Adelore jerked his head in the direction of the sound. %u201CDo you see a variapet anywhere?%u201D he ...

Fortunately, my procrastination has actually AIDED me because chapter 3 starts with them. :3

Needs more swans...

*whimpers*

Oh no...

I would have a drink with you too.

OMG. I just looked at the date. *dies* This is one of those embarrassing things that people just like and then you die of embarrassment, isn't it? XD

...OH. I would probably want to read the rest to find out what happened to the poor girl with the terrible parents, haha.

Knowing that most of these characters are severely injured (both physically and emotionally) in the future also makes me wonder if Solea and Alainna get nostalgic for this time, when ...

old writing terrifies me, lol. xD

OMG. XD You found it! I think I mentioned that I attempted to write the story, starting with how they discovered Solea's father was possessed, a while ago, and THIS ...

OH. I forgot to say, the horror vibes are strong with this one! Nicely done. :)

This is a timeless piece of art that resonates across the ages. Truly brilliant.