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Wrong place! :D *Moved to Fantasy Fiction*

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We *tried* to record it, but Grif freaked out because he didn't want to be the techno beat. Silly person thing. :P

The word "il" is actually "the" in Italian, describing a masculine object, such as a maestro. So no, not a typo. ^^

w00t! I'm waiting for the results of Lena's date. This should be interesting... XD Alex is slightly not as bad. And poor Sunshine! She tries so hard and yet she ...

I just want to point out that this is really really old and really really sucky since it was written THREE YEARS AGO. So, if you want to critique it... ...

Haha... a lot of people seem to be confused. This story is about what the title suggests: the opening of Pandora's Box. In the beginning, it refers to the origins ...

Because the metaphors support the main idea of the poem? :?

Goodness gracious! This will not do. :P Try it now. I apparently spazzed out and put it in the wrong directory. xD Sorry!

Geep. The last stanza is by far my favorite... though you gotta admit, it's quite a horrible way to die. :? Anyway! Good stuff here.

Nice :) Just one thing... The first stanza is saying Take my words... but the second is saying the opposite... Ignore me . Was this intentional? Yes. ^_^

This is a slightly hilarious poem, but if you want anybody to take it seriously, you're going to have to add more. :)

LOL. I love its digressions. ;)

this is good, rit more