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Good point, Sureal! It totally went over my head that it was supposed to be a haiku because it lacked that natural imagery that is so characteristic of haikus! I ...

OH. I just realized (from one of the other reviewers) that this is haiku. SO. It is totally okay to have haikus linked together. I think historically that this is ...

Just a quick reminder! YWS does not endorse literary censorship and allows 18 works to be posted. If you are uncomfortable reading such works, there is a disclaimer at the ...

Don't worry! This is a chain mail that's been passed around since I was a wee little Snoinklet. ;) I think I saw it around about... I want to say ...

Just put a note. "This thing was edited, because I say so." It helps! ;)

Haha, it's okay! I've seen typos in my own published work. It happens! ;)

Eh... try not to put yourself down too much and consider it terribleness, etc. I think every writer goes through this phase of attempting to write depressing stuff, except sometimes ...

While I do agree with you in that the original argument is based primarily on emotional grounds and therefore doesn't quite stand a harsh logical scrutiny, I think you went ...

ee cummings, in particular, was famous for not capitalizing his poems very much! Sometimes, these capitalization choices can lead to interesting and significant things... such as the time ee cummings ...

I am contemplating putting this in space, just for fun! Though, I don't quite know yet. In any case, it is science fiction involving biological engineering (which will be revealed ...

I am pretty sure he has another (real) name, but the boys all know him as Warden, so it is his name to them. It would be like "Dad" (since ...

Also, I apologize for the cat. He really is a miserable brat. XD

Oh, darn it... you are right. I am the writer. :P I'll figure something out! That stanza bugged me too, but I was afraid I was being too nitpicky. It's ...

Thank you so much! ^^;; Praising God is always glorious, but it's so beautiful to be able to admit our weakness to God, since to do that means to surrender ...

I understand about not wanting to change poems... I am loathe to change any of my own poems after I finish as well. ^^ Still, hopefully, this advice will come ...