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Thanks! I am glad you liked the overall flow of the story! You're the second one to comment on the abrupt transition (and the second one to come up with ...

Eek! Thanks for pointing out the typo. I totally missed that! :D *scribbles on the official list of things to improve*

Thanks for the review! I am glad that the POV shift was okay to you... I was a bit concerned about that, as well as the second POV being a ...

Well, it is in the format of a haiku, so more information might not fit so easily... ;)

One of the joys of being a published writer is that there will be critics. Some of them review the story with praise... others review the story with criticism. It ...

Hey Roze! I haven't read your story yet (in fact, I'm kind of procrastinating from going grocery shopping, to be honest, so I feel kind of guilty about starting now, ...

Just wanted to let you know that I deleted the accident review! :) My cat likes to offer similar reviews... *shakes head*

...remember that KnightTeen said that she doesn't want this to turn into debate. ;) It's okay to point out weak parts in the argument and such so that KnightTeen can ...

Fah-sard? That's weird! :o Phantom "r" sound, where did you come from?!

To be fair, romance novelists like to use that as a euphemism... *scarred for life* And it must be a UK/US difference, regarding hard/facade. I pronounce it with a hard ...

Your reply makes me think of the phrase "to know" in the biblical sense. Which makes me smile, because I knew God before I knew my husband, and it's that ...

Being assertive is okay, especially for a persuasive paper! You need to be assertive to be able to assert your side... and this is a good thing. You just need ...

It's okay! Besides, if I remember right, you might have to take your SATs soonish and then you'll have to write a quick essay on a topic that you will ...

Wait. If this isn't a review, why did you mark it as such? >.> *sighs*

YOU HAVE NOT READ MY POETRY. I mean. I wrote a piece way back when called, "Suicide with a Butter Knife." THIS IS GENIUS COMPARED TO THAT LOAD.