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Re: Murder Is Blind: First scene
Eek! Thanks for pointing out the typo. I totally missed that! :D *scribbles on the official list of things to improve*
Mar 1, 2014 -
Re: Murder Is Blind: First scene
Thanks for the review! I am glad that the POV shift was okay to you... I was a bit concerned about that, as well as the second POV being a ...
Feb 26, 2014 -
Re: The Most Common Lie
Well, it is in the format of a haiku, so more information might not fit so easily... ;)
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: The Most Exciting-Terrifying-Super-Exstatic-Fun-arific-Ultra-Scary-Adventure
One of the joys of being a published writer is that there will be critics. Some of them review the story with praise... others review the story with criticism. It ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: The Most Exciting-Terrifying-Super-Exstatic-Fun-arific-Ultra-Scary-Adventure
Hey Roze! I haven't read your story yet (in fact, I'm kind of procrastinating from going grocery shopping, to be honest, so I feel kind of guilty about starting now, ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: Something Called a Friend
Just wanted to let you know that I deleted the accident review! :) My cat likes to offer similar reviews... *shakes head*
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
...remember that KnightTeen said that she doesn't want this to turn into debate. ;) It's okay to point out weak parts in the argument and such so that KnightTeen can ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: She said you kiss like a fish.
Fah-sard? That's weird! :o Phantom "r" sound, where did you come from?!
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: She said you kiss like a fish.
To be fair, romance novelists like to use that as a euphemism... *scarred for life* And it must be a UK/US difference, regarding hard/facade. I pronounce it with a hard ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Why I believe in God.
Your reply makes me think of the phrase "to know" in the biblical sense. Which makes me smile, because I knew God before I knew my husband, and it's that ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
Being assertive is okay, especially for a persuasive paper! You need to be assertive to be able to assert your side... and this is a good thing. You just need ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
It's okay! Besides, if I remember right, you might have to take your SATs soonish and then you'll have to write a quick essay on a topic that you will ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Why I believe in God.
Wait. If this isn't a review, why did you mark it as such? >.> *sighs*
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Why I believe in God.
YOU HAVE NOT READ MY POETRY. I mean. I wrote a piece way back when called, "Suicide with a Butter Knife." THIS IS GENIUS COMPARED TO THAT LOAD.
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Why I believe in God.
This is supposed to be a poem, not a Christian apolegetics essay. :) I think that if you demanded the same kind of standards of an essay in a poem, ...
Jan 28, 2014
