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Lol, since this was posted 21 years ago, the kid is probably in his late twenties, early thirties by now! I wonder if he still writes...

Oooope. This is a scammer. >.> Sorry... they spam posted this message on tons of works.

Thank you sooo much for your review! Yes, this was originally Chapter 3, though I added a lot more to it so you get a fuller picture of what happened ...

Ahhhh thank you so much for that review! :) I am astounded you got the lore fairly accurately, hahaha. I probably would not have remembered that much upon the first ...

Fair, lol. Sometimes pantsing a book for the first draft is too fun to resist. :D

Duuuuude this is your first time writing a novel? You're honestly doing great! :D And yeah... no worries! I know how it goes, hahaha. I love reviewing, but writing is ...

I understand! Lord knows I'm still trying to iron out my own plot holes for my own story. ^^ It's all part of the writing process. :)

*pokes* Review! ;)

Omg, thank you so much! - I laughed at your comment about the Swan language bit, because -- OKAY THIS IS EMBARRASSING BUT -- I forgot how awkward that looks ...

Ahhhhh thank you for your review! :3 Solea had to have been very young when he placed her on the chopping block, and the 'crime' she allegedly committed seems vague ...

Thank you, Lady! :D (Hahaha, that seems kind of funny actually... you're right. xD) Now, if I am correct(and I may not be) this is the fourth book in a ...

OMG this had me dying laughing XDDD I MEAN. If this is the route you want to take, it's totally legit! Maybe she goes up, realizes that it's all normal, ...

You will have to let me know if/when you tap out! ^^;; That will actually be important for me to know! The series is a bit odd... each book is ...

But in my personal opinion, I think this chapter could be split into two separate ones, or perhaps a "Part I" and "Part II" situation? I honestly think everything up ...

Imp!!!! As always, it's fun to read your reviews! :D I think you do the above with Alainna/ Solea's dialogue. But not with the godparents/parents dialogue. It made picturing them ...