Snoink

I gree with Snoink, but it is also very good. I like the whole thing. It is lucky that he got the letter that day. Very sweet. I thought he ...

You are only 13 years old, my dear. There is always room to grow.

I thought the ending was too overblown and dramatic. *shrugs*

Nah... it's a short enough sentence not to need it. ;) But! DO NOT USE THIS FOR AN ANTI-ABORTION CAMPAIGN. Seriously... if you purposely knew that this was a prolife ...

The one that pops into mind right now is one you told us creepos on Bald Mountain. ... told us about creepos on Bald Mountain? Or maybe I just didn't ...

A diary entry! It's a little stupid now... I was young, honest! But it was written when I was scared, so please understand the sloppy writing. September 11, 2001 AD ...

XD Oh, come on! Michelle Branch isn't that good. This is just a catchy tune. There's no greatness about it. :P

The dialogue was good and very realistic. But, as the big chimp himself said, it doesn't really connect well. We're never really sure who the narrator is. If we knew, ...

I... let people off easily? I LET PEOPLE OFF EASILY?????? Geez... you're such a n00b.

XD Why should you feel sorry for me feeling the way I did? If it is meant to be hated, you did a good job, lol! Just fix that one ...

Hehe! I've been thinking about it for awhile now, and this has turned into one of my favorite poems on YWS. :) And it takes a lot for me to ...

I agree with Yoshi. Capitalization is a must, especially here. It looks unreadable without it. Sometimes you can get away with not capitalizing, but in this case, no.

His humor is a little tricky to catch though, lol. I'm reading Oliver Twist now though. :P

Oh! Sorry. Lorca is this beautiful Spanish playwright/poet. His work is simply amazing, and I happen to be doing one of plays, "Bodas de Sangre" so I get to look ...

Goodness, Snoink. Remind me to not post my poetry, then :P Random-ish, but funny. not must to rip apart, though :whistle: but..st-st- staplers? she knows not what she says! Wha? ...