Snoink

XD Nice and cute. Chocolate is indeed wonderful, eh? ;)

Thanks! :)

XD I like this line the best (though I'm not saying why!): When it snows, I’ll hold you close, Warming you up In the process. We can roll in the ...

Meh. Life sucks.

Pretty stuff! :)

I have to say, it looks really fun to do, but an explanation would have been fine. Your underlining it went a little overboard... Even so, nice job. Awesome writing ...

This is so totally awesome... and very catchy. Double platinum, baby!

It's an American thing then. Our books are edited so that only old books have that two quotation marks. On a side note, Spanish does it really weird. It would ...

Take away Switchfoot's lyrics. It really overshadows your work.

Are the misspellings also intentional?

XD @ Jojo: The old Snoink? Here's a thought for you! What if the old Snoink you know is actually the new Snoink? If you look at my prose and ...

I've always wanted to do something like this! :) Anyway, very nice.

I think the "cold" atmosphere is created when you edit words out. Face it: when you edit to oblivion, it's going to sound a lot more barer than your typical, ...

Meshy wanted me to look at her critique. Yay! now, I am a nit pink when it comes to poetry. I take it you're writing about the art work here, ...

How can I refuse now? *whaps head* Though I still think it would be awesome if she were eaten by coyotes. ***************************** It was about predawn when she finally heard ...