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Hehehe! This is an adorably cute poem. :) Just one tiny error... it should be this: "There’s something about the fall effect, affects me through and through." So just switch ...

Hmm... interesting! I would like to have some sort of idea about what this person is... or creature. I'm not quite sure! I also want to know if there was ...

I think having eleven sets of tildas would be better so as to symbolize the eleven dimensions of string theory. Twelve seems to be a bit weird... it looks even, ...

Hmmm... interesting! So, basically, they interact with each other in their dreams? That's a pretty neat idea! One thing that I might do is describe exactly how Sophie and Emelia ...

Hmmm... This poem has two major parts of it that are wholly unconnected with each other. One has to do with the learning of language and the other has to ...

Very Twilight-Zone of you! I like it. :) Then again, I'm kind of a sucker for science fiction, lol. Plus, it's science fiction that talks about the consequences of technology... ...

That's when you do a full body wax! :o Nah, I'm just kidding. I like your piece. Though, it's pretty sad! Having no heart is generally a bad thing! Although, ...

Hey Yuriiko! :D Basically, I think the other guys are right. It's cute, but it doesn't have any substance. I think it would be funnier if you included some more ...

Hey guys! Let's put this back on track. Keep comments about the reviews of the poem only! No commenting on comments. Veiyloxx! If you do not want to get anymore ...

The title was pretty much the definition of awesome! Juts one question though... how would the world be colorless and school be not boring with these socks? It's a bit ...

Try putting the boy more into the poem. Right now, the leaves seems to have a bigger part than he does. It would be nice to see the leaves do ...

Dun dun dunnnnnn! As a side note, it always strikes me as funny when people describe cities as being snowy. I have never been in a big city which has ...

Hey snickerdooly! :D First of all, do a quick check and make sure that everything is spelled right. Right now, everything isn't quite right. ;) Anyway, for the voice! You ...

Hahaha! Ooooooh my. Charlotte and Lucky are so cute together! I say he get rid of Lola and take Charlie. Soon. They're kind of perfect for each other. Although, I ...

Hey SmritiBansal! :D First of all! You misspelled "their." You wrote it as "thier" instead. So make sure that you correct those spelling errors! Now, for your poem! I liked ...