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Re: Delusion
Dude! I just stumbled on this (yes, I am a horrible stalker and all) and I just wanted to tell you how much I loved it! The ideas... the zombie ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: The Deserter - Chapter 3, Part 2 (OUTDATED)
Hi ultraviolet! Sorry I took so long, things got busy on my end! But, I have to admit I'm a bit disappointed that you haven't posted more yet. XD So! ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Lifewish: Prologue
Ballet! :D I've never done it, but I love stories with ballet. Anyway, the main thing about this piece that I noticed was the dialogue grammar. You definitely need to ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Tower Girls- 2.1
I told you I would review this! :D First, a typo! Later, I would be driven made by the call used by suitors (though at the same time it was ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Tower Girls- 1
STELLA. You should have told me that you edited this! But that's okay because Firestarter's review on the next piece made me remember this piece and I was able to ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Deserter - Chapter 3, Part 1 (OUTDATED)
Ultraviolet! D: I agree with borntobeawriter here... I would really like to have seen a meeting with her and Gavin better. Or maybe a dream. Not a flashback. Not that ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Deserter - Chapter 2, Part 2 (OUTDATED)
Yay! I'm back for more! :D I've never read The Hunger Games (I know, I am a horrible person, etc., etc.) so I can't help you with that, unfortunately! :( ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: cinnamon excuses for false urgencies
Hello! I'll be just reviewing one poem (the first!) because it was interesting and such and I kind of adored it. Plus, I really want to go deep into it, ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Velvet Gravestone - Chapter 1 1/2
Hey Kyousuke! :D Hm. Post modern? Eh. Well, I guess it is. Kind of. But not really. It's post modern in the way that things don't really mesh together as ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Mirror: Chapter Two
Micki! :D Okay! I hate to be the one who rains on the parade but... well... I've had a couple of head concussions, and they are not fun. xD I ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Winterland.
Hey Jasmine! Okay, this was really weird and maybe a bit too short. Part of me wants to say, "It's too abstract!" and the other part of me wants to ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Confused
Hi SassyKat! :D I think it's fine where it is! You didn't really tell a story as much as you expressed feelings and such. So, I think lyric poetry fits! ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Be Quick.
Hello housecat! :D Hmm... you're right! It does feel like there's something missing. I think it's because it's jerky and it doesn't really completely what it wants to say in ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Mirror: Chapter One
OH NOES. *flails* First of all, I liked this chapter sooooo much better. It was like, "OH NO. THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING!" Which is a good thing to feel in ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Mirror prologue
Hey Micki! :D First of all, a couple of typos! “You'll loose braincells if you keep thinking about those things.”
May 1, 2011
