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Hmmm... I liked this, but I never replied! Anyway, I really did like this! It was so crazy and bizarre. I kind of loved it. Juliet is such a ditz ...

Oooh! Your picture is lovely! I love how it accompanies your poem... you are quite an amazing photographer! Also, usually I don't like to comment on age, especially with relationship ...

I totally thought of the Mussorgsky song too! And, it is an awesome song. But you knew this. I looove this piece! I love the whole house with the chicken ...

Okay! So, I don't get it! Why did he keep the porcelain dish if he didn't actually steal it? Also, it sounds like he's really, really guilty, so when he ...

Do you haiku?! Nah, just kidding, obviously you have! :D Okay, so the thing is that you only have a limited amount of syllables in a haiku to pack the ...

DUDE. I lost a shoe the other week... sill can't find it. It's pretty awkward. It's a little black flat and I only lost one of them. In any case, ...

Hi Tangent! :D I love you and your work always, so yay! I love the word play, especially the part where she says she forgets the whether that person is ...

ZOMG, it's wisemann210! Nice to see you back in the literary forums. :D You seem to be developing your poetry style! It's nice to see that. :) My main comment ...

Oh noes! I kind of wish Joy survived... being possessed by demons is never a fun thing, and then to die from it? That's just awful! How did that demon ...

Excellent space imagery here! Plus, have I mentioned how much I like all the scientific references here? And I love how you tied everything in with astronomical phenomenon. The main ...

There's this one song that I love... it's called "Timshel" and it's by Mumford and Sons. Anyway, one of the lines goes like this: And you have your choices And ...

Hi ashjoy! :D This is cute! It's nice to see a story about a young, romantic couple who is hopelessly in love. :) And the ice cream is a nice ...

Ew, lol. Having lice is never fun! I have a question! Is this body lice or hair lice that we're talking about? They're both a bit different... I've had both ...

Yay for submitting things that you like! :D Okay, this may just be me, but I really, really like juicy stories full of tons of drama. For instance, when I ...

Hmm! This may just be me, but I found this pretty confusing and a bit strange. When I heard that the house smelled bad, I thought at first that this ...