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Hello! You were a little late in writing this, lol. It's not quite Christmas anymore! But it's good that you have written it now. :) Okay! So, first thing that ...

Teague: I know it's been a while, but I still friggin' adore this poem. This clearly shows off your true literary talents. I hope your Sun Devil friends aren't spoiling ...

Hi! First of all... er... why are you writing in orange? It looks kind of strange. :? Anyway! I definitely like the French version better... I mean, I think it's ...

Considering that you did this in 10-15 minutes, this is really goo! The metering is a little off, with syllable counts, but I am suer that you can get that ...

Hi Pickle! :) No, this isn't terrible! Actually, this poem is ripe for potential. You deal with a lot of fascinating issues in a compare and contrast way. I like ...

Hi Lavvie! Okay, so first of all, I am not familiar with Wayman and Lane, so maybe I am missing something crucial here. Still, after reading through this poem several ...

Hey Star! :) This is pretty amusing! I didn't get that the friend was the writing until the last couple of stanzas where you explicitly mentioned it, though I did ...

Ooers, I really really liked this. You did very well because you had all these specific examples and you had awesome visionary and... let's face it... going on walks is ...

Eek! I hope your friend is okay.

Hello! :) All righty! So, over here it looks like your main focus is on the betrayal. You told this person that you wanted something to be kept confidential--something that ...

Hello! :) This kind of looks like a haiku... except it isn't! I don't know... it seems a bit strange because normal haikus have lines which go 5, 7, 5, ...

For a while, it took me a while to figure out that Death was the speaker. I think I am an idiot. xD Still! Once I found this out, the ...

Oh my goodness, this was so cute. :) I love t he poem's ideas and I loved the way you rhymed it and everything. It actually kind of reminds me ...

Hey BrokenSkye! :D Okay! So, a love poem! Let's look at this, shall we? :) I love you, and I missed you so. I saw your face, and the butterflies ...

Persy! I love you, but I think that this isn't your best poem. Because you're such a goshdarn awesome writer, this means that this piece is okay, not horrible. Still... ...